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Reviewer: kbDArt Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 14 2023 4:00 PM Title: Chapter 1

Great erotic story. Well written. Great dialogue and interactions; I like the Anna Baptiste character a lot. Great reactions and effort by the tiny at the realization of his situation and his attempts to survive,

Reviewer: banfield Signed [Report This]
Date: January 29 2015 3:40 AM Title: Chapter 1

Hello again P.Eddie. I sent you a message but stupidly sent it to myself! I asked whether you're still about, and if so, have you lost interest in gts stories? Admittedly, I have, but still fantasise such scenes even altho I remain in the real world, ie: Being full-size and enduring the same torments as those shrunken characters. Pope, it would be good if you do come back and let me know how you are and if you still write or have any interests in the Femdom world?

 

A. Banfield  (Tony) 

Reviewer: banfield Signed [Report This]
Date: May 15 2009 5:57 AM Title: Chapter 1

Okay, Pope Eddie, I'm forging ahead with the sequel and enjoying it. I accept your reluctance in not revealing your em address and shall continue. I can only hope that I shall succeed in posting it on site, something I've had difficulty in doing. If I fail I can ask my friend, Stanley Williams to post it for me.  I do hope you enjoy it as much as I have.

           Tony 

Reviewer: banfield Signed [Report This]
Date: May 14 2009 6:30 AM Title: Chapter 1

 Well, Pope Eddie, I've started the sequel. It'll take me a few days but I must warn you, it will venture into the more erotic and the victim will not be shrunk so small as yours.  If you'd like a preview of it when completed, I can send it to you personally - by letting me know you email address. I've often entered my address on this site and it's perfectly safe to do so.

     Yours, Tony



Author's Response: No need for a preview Tony, I'd rather enjoy the surprise of finding out what else Anna gets up to and not be in a position to influence her in any way.

Reviewer: banfield Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 14 2009 3:20 AM Title: Chapter 1

 Thank you for your reply and your agreement to my offer of writing a sequel. However, altho I'm not at all everse to religion I feel it's likely to turn readers off and dilutes the strength of a story of this kind.

 Have you read any of my numerous stories on this site?



Author's Response:

I made her a tight arsed religious zealot because because I thought it WAS a turn on! But in all honesty I don't mind a bit what you do with Anna. She's old enough to look after herself.

And yes, I've most certainly read your amazing stories.

Reviewer: banfield Signed [Report This]
Date: May 13 2009 7:49 AM Title: Chapter 1

 Just one more, Pope Eddie: After reading your story I would have in mind to write a sequence to it and have Anna Baptiste capture an innocent male, shrink him to around 6 to 8 inches and sexually enjoy herself with him prior to eating him - but NOT swallowing.

Would you object to my idea?



Author's Response:

Hi Banfield. Many thanks for the positive comments. though sorry about the grammaticals, never my strong point, but I'm glad you pointed it out.

As for writing a story about Anna, YES, GO FOR IT! I'd be honoured if you did. Bear in mind that Anna is a clever and sincere woman of strong Christian values, who usually only kills people because she thinks she has a mandate to do so from God. (She'd make a good Prime Minister one day!) But I'm sure she's not averse to a bit of extra curricular activity now and then!

Reviewer: banfield Signed [Report This]
Date: May 13 2009 7:25 AM Title: Chapter 1

 Well, Pope Eddie, I've read the 2nd & 3rd chapters and, apart from the many grammatical errors and the lack of erotic content, it was a jolly good read.  Again I thank you for sharing it.   Well done that man!

Reviewer: banfield Signed [Report This]
Date: May 13 2009 4:44 AM Title: Chapter 1

As soon as I saw the name 'Baptiste' I thought YES! Afro-West Indian.....terrific!  I then read the first chapter and it was so very good - AND realistic.   So I've yet to read the next two parts and, from one Englishman to another, I say jolly good so far......and shall add to my review when all is read.     Thanks a lot, Pope Eddie!

Reviewer: BigAl Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 10 2009 6:16 PM Title: Chapter 1

Thoroughly enjoyed this story, Pope Eddie!  Makes me even more determined not to get an ID card now! :-)

Author's Response: Many thanks BigAl. No to ID cards!!

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