Date: July 15 2009 11:41 PM Title: Chapter 3
this is a really great story. I hope Anne eventually finds melanie and likes the idea of just keeping her as a pet and a foot slave. I really hope you continue it
Date: May 13 2009 4:23 PM Title: Chapter 1
Great stuff. Can't go wrong with good unaware writing. Please continue.
Date: May 12 2009 10:27 PM Title: Chapter 1
I said end it with some unaware vore. Or better yet, how about having him cheat on her and somehow. She lands on his dick and gets swallowed by the other girl. :-) LOL
Date: May 07 2009 4:00 PM Title: Chapter 3
So far, very very nice. I enjoyed chapter 3 immensley!
Date: May 07 2009 1:51 PM Title: Chapter 1
I agree with the reviewers. I've been enjoying the story so far. I would of course, try to get you to throw in a scene where she gets stuck inside a burger and almost eaten by someone, but that's because it's my thing(Actually, I would like her to be really eaten, but I don't think you want that, so I'm just throwing it out therE)
Date: May 07 2009 8:38 AM Title: Chapter 2
outstanding story! Up there w/ the best unaware stories on the board
Date: May 07 2009 12:40 AM Title: Chapter 1
More of the same would be awesome by me :), love the flats, feet detail, non-dominance is good for once, gentle feet would be nice :D, nice story keep it up!
Date: May 06 2009 6:45 AM Title: Chapter 1
Great story! I love that she's unaware and I love the flats.
Date: May 06 2009 5:32 AM Title: Chapter 1
GREAT story!
I've never read a scenario like this and you write it beautifully.
Keep up the good work.
Date: May 05 2009 7:38 PM Title: Chapter 1
Like they said, Great cant wait for the rest!
Date: May 05 2009 3:31 PM Title: Chapter 1
I havent actually logged in to gtsworld in a while but i had to after i read this just to add it to my favorites and ask you to KEEP WRITING! great start.
Date: May 05 2009 2:52 PM Title: Chapter 1
Wow, I really liked the story, for this to be your first one, its very nice! I completely encourage you to keep writing, as I'm sure many people will start reading your stories the more you update them, keep up the awesome work!