[Report This]Date: December 05 2025 4:45 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Part 1
This is a very appealing story, I especially love how you describe her basically raping him so vividly.
Your ability to play with words and project the scenes directly into the readers mind is envbiable.
The beginning feels very plausible, the idea of his girlfriend moving and the package returns to sender, his misunderstandabe letter, that gives the reader a smooth transition to the jucie parts.
Thanks for bothering and putting so much brain into this piece.
What bothers me is the imbalance between people watching the story and people actually reacting to it.
You have more than 114k hits on this neatrly 13k words thing and just 3 (4 with mine here) repiles?
If someone is unhappy with your upload frequency or where you put your work than okay, don´t read it.
Everyones own choice.
But I´m sure you could fill at least one whole big bathtube with all the spunk produced by reading this story alone.
That´s worse than not even giving a fuck.
In my opinion the "community" has faild here spectacuarly.
So at least a thanks form my side for the contribution. :)
[Report This]Date: February 22 2025 6:27 PM Title: Chapter 4 - Part 3 - In her panties at the gym
Love this sweaty and sexy scene! Great story with varied parts of the fetish genres, kind of ticking all the boxes but doesn't read like it's trying to, great stuff!
[Report This]Date: June 07 2023 7:54 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Part 1
Wow, this is hot, love the how the tables have turned and she is dominating him. Can't wait to see what happens next. Can you include some butt action or P insert?
Author's Response:
Thanks for your feedback, glad you enjoyed this. Yes I have included some butt and P insertion action in the next parts of this story!
Date: March 05 2022 12:58 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Part 1
So the only way to read the rest of this story is to become a patron...
You're not going to eventually upload the rest here?
That's really limiting the ammount of people who are going to want to engage in your content if it's solely being released fully on Patreon with no chance of a later release here.
Author's Response:
There is quite a bit of my content available on here actually, but writing does take time to do, the more support I have for my work the more I can produce both on Patreon and here.