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Reviewer: Koss Signed [Report This]
Date: August 01 2022 11:02 AM Title: Chapter 34 - Peaceful night on the city

Curious to see how Will Elsa calm her stomach, Will the city suffer much more?

Reviewer: kingkong89 Signed [Report This]
Date: July 26 2022 5:57 PM Title: Chapter 33 - Zack & Mimi

Great, looking forward to Ginevra and Cynthia joining "the giant monsters"

Reviewer: writer27 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: July 25 2022 2:27 PM Title: Chapter 34 - Peaceful night on the city

This is a strange perspective for a story but I find myself eagerly anticipating weekly new chapters. I also really like that you don't just write one chapter and drop three at a time. Keep it up nice work.

Reviewer: Koss Signed [Report This]
Date: July 25 2022 11:23 AM Title: Chapter 34 - Peaceful night on the city

The evolution of the characters is incredible, never stops to surprise me, keep going this amazing story, is great!!!

Reviewer: Koss Signed [Report This]
Date: July 19 2022 5:32 PM Title: Chapter 31 - Micheal, Elsa & Carol

Amazing, cant wait for the nexts chapters!!

Reviewer: Koss Signed [Report This]
Date: July 05 2022 5:59 PM Title: Chapter 28: - Micheal steps in

Getting better and better

Reviewer: kingkong89 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 23 2022 3:26 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Zack & Mimi

looking forward to the next update, very good story

Reviewer: Koss Signed [Report This]
Date: June 23 2022 1:35 PM Title: Chapter 25 - Eric, Alfred & Missy

really loving this story

Reviewer: Koss Signed [Report This]
Date: June 08 2022 1:38 PM Title: Chapter 23 - Elsa, Carol & the family

this is amazing, this is my favourite story by far, great job, hoping to see whats coming next

Reviewer: suce57 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 05 2022 10:52 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Zack & Mimi

One of my favorite mega couples story. Please keep it going. Much appreciated 

Reviewer: kingkong89 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 26 2022 4:37 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Zack & Mimi

we are very much looking forward to the next

Reviewer: Koss Signed [Report This]
Date: May 20 2022 11:05 AM Title: Chapter 21 - Missy, Alfred & Eric

Cant wait for nexts chapters

Reviewer: warrah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 06 2022 4:20 AM Title: Chapter 21 - Missy, Alfred & Eric

Still great, congratulations!

Reviewer: kingkong89 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 05 2022 3:52 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Zack & Mimi

excellent story

Reviewer: Koss Signed [Report This]
Date: May 05 2022 12:17 PM Title: Chapter 21 - Missy, Alfred & Eric

The characters levelopment is amazing, this is my favourite story by far

Reviewer: suce57 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 20 2022 7:22 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Zack & Mimi

Better and better, one of my new all time favorites. Great character development, great writing too


A+

Reviewer: Koss Signed [Report This]
Date: April 10 2022 10:18 PM Title: Chapter 15 - Zack & Mimi & the cove

This getting better and better, looking forward for nexts chapters!!

Reviewer: kingkong89 Signed [Report This]
Date: March 31 2022 4:28 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Zack & Mimi

great story

Reviewer: warrah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 25 2022 6:53 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Zack & Mimi

Best story I have read in years, thank you so much for writing it.Looking forward to the next chapters.

Reviewer: suce57 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 23 2022 5:07 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Zack & Mimi

Love it, especially the husband wife monster theme. Looking forward to future updates

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