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Reviewer: Koss Signed [Report This]
Date: June 15 2025 9:36 AM Title: Chapter 66 - Making deals

Any updates on this soon?

Reviewer: Koss Signed [Report This]
Date: March 17 2025 6:21 PM Title: Chapter 66 - Making deals

Still waiting for updates, i hope we can get more of this amazing story

Reviewer: Koss Signed [Report This]
Date: December 25 2024 5:01 PM Title: Chapter 66 - Making deals

Still cheking from time to time to see if you uploaded new chapters. really hope you keep with the story

Reviewer: Sunshine1 Signed [Report This]
Date: December 17 2024 9:12 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Zack & Mimi

Best story ever. Really hoping for more chapters every day, constantly checking!

Reviewer: Koss Signed [Report This]
Date: November 19 2024 9:46 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Zack & Mimi

Still checking for updates, i really hope we are more of this amazing story

Reviewer: Koss Signed [Report This]
Date: October 08 2024 11:34 AM Title: Chapter 66 - Making deals

Hope we have new chapters soon

Reviewer: kingkong89 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 03 2024 7:11 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Zack & Mimi

hey :D

Reviewer: Koss Signed [Report This]
Date: August 24 2024 11:53 AM Title: Chapter 66 - Making deals

Still checking from time to time hoping to see new chapters

Reviewer: Koss Signed [Report This]
Date: July 16 2024 12:15 PM Title: Chapter 66 - Making deals

Any news about new chapters?


Reviewer: Koss Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 18 2024 8:35 AM Title: Chapter 66 - Making deals

Hope we can soon see new chapters with Elsa, she is my favourite character in the story

Reviewer: zzz_2 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 11 2024 11:24 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Zack & Mimi

I forgot to rate the story, I love you, keep going mwah.

Reviewer: zzz_2 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 10 2024 10:33 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Zack & Mimi

I LOVE COLLECTIVE CORRUPTION!! I LOVE COLLECTIVE CORRUPTION!! I LOVE COLLECTIVE CORRUPTION!!!


THANK YOU for coming back!! This story is literally giving me fuel I just love it, keep going!!

Reviewer: Koss Signed [Report This]
Date: June 08 2024 12:11 PM Title: Chapter 66 - Making deals

So happy to see new chapters, wonder how the situation between zach and Ginevra will resolve

Reviewer: liliannnwritesstuff Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 07 2024 11:47 PM Title: Chapter 65 - Catching up

we're so back!!

Reviewer: kingkong89 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 07 2024 5:43 PM Title: Chapter 66 - Making deals

I wonder what will happen between Ginevra and Zach

Reviewer: kingkong89 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 07 2024 5:34 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Zack & Mimi

still amazing, glad to see new chapters added to the story

Reviewer: kingkong89 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 01 2024 2:57 PM Title: Chapter 64 - Minding the distance

I hope you continue :D

Reviewer: Koss Signed [Report This]
Date: May 23 2024 8:36 AM Title: Chapter 64 - Minding the distance

Still have faith that we Will get more chapters of this amazing story

Reviewer: Schoolgirlshoes Signed [Report This]
Date: March 21 2024 5:02 PM Title: Chapter 9 - Hannah & Micheal

This is by far my favourite chapter, the giant's dick collecting people and obliterating building was then given a blow job -  really sexy!!

Reviewer: Koss Signed [Report This]
Date: March 09 2024 10:14 PM Title: Chapter 64 - Minding the distance

Hope to see more chapters soon

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