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Reviewer: Odysseus Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 14 2022 1:46 PM Title: Chapter 1: A Strange Amulet

Great story so far!


I think it'd be fun if he ended up in someone's butt while they riding at some point. Either under Leonie on a horse, or preferably under Ingrid while she's on a pegasus.


I also think it'd be great to get Dorothea and Petra involved. Petra always called Bernadette "prey", could see her doing same to tiny Byleth whether that means trying to pin him under foot or trying to catch him in her mouth. Maybe then Dorothea can take him from Petra and keep him safe in a bra cup under one of her boobs or something.



Author's Response:

Ooh, definitely! I for sure plan on getting Leonie and Dorothea involved at some point, as well as Rhea due to my buddy being a huge fan of her "design". I've never been the biggest fan of Ingrid mainly due to my first playthrough (Blue Lions of course) and her support with Best Man Dedue, but she's grown on me. Either way, I'm glad you're liking it, and I hope you continue to enjoy what I've got cooking up!

Reviewer: The Count Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 26 2022 8:02 PM Title: Chapter 1: A Strange Amulet

Pretty good for your first story, I hope you keep at it! :D

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