Reviewer: D72 Signed [Report This]
Date: December 13 2022 11:03 PM Title: All's well

While I definitely enjoy seeing transphobia and bigotry being called out for what it is, it'd be nice if the slurs (i.e., tr***y, & sh****e) used to describe Vanessa in various scenes by the AUTHOR could be removed.

I'm not saying I enjoy reading slurs in the context of a transphobic character either, just that the context is very much different.

Author's Response:

Hey there, so sorry about my poor choice of words, throughout some of the chapters. That was not intentional to offend anyone. I took the liberty to taking as much of that out of the story as I could, which I hope will increase people's enjoyment of the story going forward. As you said, context is key, so I'mma make sure this story tells the right narrative.

Reviewer: Raven_girl Signed [Report This]
Date: February 18 2022 1:42 PM Title: And the adventure continues

Hi, i like the story and how you are managing the characters, just a little comment, words like tranny and shemale are considered to be slurs/despective terms within trans communities

Reviewer: Catgirl_Warcrimes Signed [Report This]
Date: February 14 2022 6:02 PM Title: Making a good impression

Love the story so far! Trans Rights! 🏳a039;r05;🌈d84;a039;