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Reviewer: D W Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 16 2022 2:53 AM Title: Chapter 1

Your story starts off a tad bit slow {the best stories usually do}, then takes off like a rocket just like the shrinking chamber.  Very well done.

I like how Natalie and Greg hit it off in the shrinking chamber, and take advantage of their various size differences to enjoy each other's bodies.

Perhaps Greg will come to realize being four inches and Natalie's play toy is preferable to ever being regrown.

Perhaps Dr. Natasha Wright will find her own little play toy.

Can't wait to read more.  Terrific story.




Author's Response:

I wrote it as a one shot, and while I can't imagine our protagonist agreeing to be tiny forever I think the shrinking chamber will have a lifelong impact on their relationship. A lot of my stories start off slow, but I think they get to the desired point. 

Reviewer: Edgedej4 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: February 13 2022 10:06 AM Title: Chapter 1

Wow this was really well done. I think you said this was a one shot but I could honestly see it going further, even if it doesn’t it’s still written really well and has a nice kinda cliff hanger ending.

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