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Reviewer: WookieWizard Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 10 2023 5:06 AM Title: Chapter 1

What do you know, this one is amazing too! I felt so jealous of Dave, getting with a girl like Darcy. He's got quite the future ahead of him.



Author's Response:

Thanks! His relationship certainly won't be boring, that's for sure.

Reviewer: Justin-Bailey Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 10 2022 3:41 PM Title: Chapter 1

I created an account just to say I really enjoyed this story. The character interactions and lack of understanding about the other's culture was cute, and I love the vulnerability of being in an unfamiliar and strange land on top of the usual vulnerability of being shrunk and eaten. Not being to get out of it once it started also really tickled my fancy. :)

Yep, that's all, just wanted to say I enjoyed it!



Author's Response:

Thanks! I like these kind of silly misunderstandings, glad you liked the story

Reviewer: Milla Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 31 2022 1:11 AM Title: Chapter 1

OH MY FUCKING GOSH THIS IS PERFECT!!

I don't like cussing but this story got me by surprise and it was SUPER! Really, this story checked ALL the boxes of my favorite romantic vore scenario! It's literally like you did read my mind, Greenanon! What kind of sorcery is that!?

To show you what I'm saying: I don't know if you already read my first story in this site, 'A Date with Emily', that I published last year, when I registered as a writer on this site. This story of mine was sort of a literal transcription of my favorite romantic vore scenario (and my favorite vore type is the romantic vore, just you know) and had all the elements I fantasize a lot in my romantic vore imagination... so, your story and mine's have almost EVERYTHING in common, LITERALLY: in both stories, the man, who's on a dinner date with the loved woman, unknowingly chooses a menu option which ends up causing him to shrunk to be food for the woman. In both stories, the woman knows what he's choosing and feels surprised with his choice, but doesn't warn the man, going on with it. In both stories, the man ends up enjoying being tiny with the loved woman, who ends up eating him for real. In both stories, the man is saved somehow. In both stories, the couple ends in the woman's place, ready for some sexy fun...

'A date with Emily' translated into a story my "perfect romantic vore scenario", and  your "A Dinner Date with a witch" made exactly the same, hitting me in a very pleasurable surprise! How did you..!?

Ok, I guess I'll never be able to voice out how I FUCKING LOVED that one (sorry for cussing again). Not only the story is clearly my fave among all your stories, but also it has the quality of a Greenanon story! Why didn't I read this story before??



Author's Response:

I'll try to read and review A Date with Emily when I have a chance, bookmarked it for now. I feel like it's a good scenario, so if it unconscionably echoed I guess we're the the Flash Gordon and Buck Rodgers of romantic vore, not that it's a crowded field lol. To run over vore in my stories, Conquest of Earth sees the protagonist eaten a few times, by friends, and he always ends up okay, Welcome to Hell has the main characters invincible because they're ghosts/lost souls, so it happens to them as a punishment at first, then as more of a prank as the demon and angel characters are introduced. My current ongoing Saving the Kingdom for Dummies has vore as an element but nobody makes the "full trip" since the girls in the story are actually pretty nice all things considered.

Glad you enjoyed it, hoping to see more comments on other stories! Look for my Date with Emily review!

Reviewer: Gershwin Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 16 2022 6:09 AM Title: Chapter 1

I really enjoyed this story, the characters felt fun to read and believable, the budding relationship cute. And of course the fetish aspect was handled well.

Reviewer: Edgedej4 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 13 2022 10:16 AM Title: Chapter 1

Very cool concept and good use of detail. I like gentle stuff especially so I found this particularly enjoyable to read.

Reviewer: Jsmith20 Signed [Report This]
Date: February 13 2022 1:16 AM Title: Chapter 1

Well I certainly am enjoying your writing so far. I know what you mean about practice, that's why I started writing some of my giantess material too. There's some stuff I'm working on that I want to finish first before posting(One story I intended to be just erotica but instead wound up being a fluff story tackling depression and self-worth, so you know some stories go they way they go).

And good luck with your 'regular' writing(and everything else you do in life that you enjoy), I know I'll probably never connect it to you because you'll want to keep it separate from this stuff, but hopefully I run across it one day.

Reviewer: Jsmith20 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 12 2022 11:06 PM Title: Chapter 1

Dude, you are killing it with your stories. You very cemented yourself as top-tier writer on this site. 

The best one-shots are always the ones that make you wish they were more than just one shots. While being incredibly satisfying the characters in this story made me wish for more.

You're very skilled at writing and could probably get a publishing deal for non-fetish writing. Hell, if you tweaked some of this story you could probably get a publishing deal by a more-mainstream publishing company. (Of course what you want to do is up to you, but just know that you're really good at this.)



Author's Response:

That's pretty high praise! I've got some ideas and works in progress for less sexy writing, but I enjoy this kind of thing and so here we are. I've mostly been writing short stories as a sort of request thing for people on 4chan just for kicks and to practice, I'm uploading my backlog on here as I get time to edit and post them. Some are better than others, I'll probably dump a "misc stories" post at some point.

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