[Report This]Date: August 09 2023 12:28 AM Title: Chapter 3: Day Off
wow, it was a story I came across a long time ago, it's nice to have you back. I hope the other chapters continue quickly.
Author's Response:
Appreciate it. We’ll see! Life is chaos!
[Report This]Date: August 09 2023 12:00 AM Title: Chapter 3: Day Off
very nice story. My suggestion to you is that Maria notices her passenger and thinks that she came here willingly.
Author's Response:
Maybe if I feel like it later on, though I was kinda planning for this one to kinda stay unaware. Who knows though maybe I’ll change my mind! Thanks for the positive review!
[Report This]Date: March 01 2023 7:59 AM Title: Chapter 2: Restless Night
Can't believe it took me a year before I found this story. It's a great one! Well thought out writing and escalation. Love the mix of panty, sweat, and fart content!
Would be great to see it continued some day.
Author's Response:
Appreciate them comment! I’ll get there one day!
Date: June 12 2022 5:25 PM Title: Chapter 1: Empty Cart
Really good stuff, eager to see what further unaware situations he can be dragged into. I hope the story continues on when you get the chance.
Author's Response:
Yes yes, soon enough, there will be more to witness
[Report This]Date: February 15 2022 7:35 PM Title: Chapter 2: Restless Night
Another great chapter! I love how pathetically weak Ren is compared to the unaware giantess. The fact that she’s sleeping makes the whole situation even more dehumanizing and a lot more entertaining to read. You’ve also done a great job staying descriptive without being repetitive.
This is a really great chapter for fans of unaware, fart and booty content. I can’t wait to read your next chapter!
Author's Response:
I appreciate it. I’m making an effort to go between a dozen different themed stories of mine and choose wording carefully as to not be repetitive when possible, so I thank you for your rating and comment as it’s a great boost of confidence that I maybe know how to write :D!
Date: February 13 2022 3:09 PM Title: Chapter 1: Empty Cart
Great job! Will definitely be keeping my eye on this one
Author's Response:
Thank you! Very much so appreciated!
[Report This]Date: February 13 2022 8:20 AM Title: Chapter 1: Empty Cart
This was very good, love the attention to detail. Something that can be very difficult to achieve.
Author's Response:
I appreciate this. This whole bedroom scene was originally going to be just 1.5k words at most, and then what is now gonna be chapter 3 would’ve been part of chapter 2.
However, as I was writing, I checked and didn’t realize that I had already passed 3k words, so it was an unexpected surprise to myself that I wrote as much as I did, but it’s Great cause that means more chapters can happen xP
[Report This]Date: February 12 2022 4:09 AM Title: Chapter 1: Empty Cart
Great start to your story, I can't wait to see what you add next! Lots of awesome fart content so far, I'm looking forward to what you can do with scat content if you decide to take this story down that path.
Author's Response: I appreciate the review and comments. I don’t wanna necessarily spoil any specifics cause I haven’t decided on them yet, but the story will be continuing with booty as the primary topic, so anything involving booty is fair game to appear in future chapters.
Date: February 11 2022 8:56 AM Title: Chapter 1: Empty Cart
You wrote your story in the wrong box and because of that it cannot be enlarged by clicking on the + symbol to the right.
Author's Response:
Hello! The + symbol is working for me. And I just double checked that it was in the correct box. I am uncertain as to why you are having this problem. My chapter notes and story notes which appear before the actual story portion are a couple paragraphs long. Do you think it’s possible that you could’ve accidentally thought that they were part of the main story text?
Otherwise, I don’t really know what else it could be, cause it appears to be functional on my end.