[Report This]Date: March 06 2022 1:58 AM Title: Unseen Enemies Pt. 3
This story is pretty good.
I suppose that after this override of the Aelmari mission to destroy the cultist ship, and that someone went so far to try and off them and disrupt humans relations, they might take a more active role in looking for, defending against, and eliminating threats to their mission. And you never piss of rogue AIs intent on preserving their goal. Besides the diplomatic incident involving the Glana.
So it will be interesting to see that.
And of course, humans are apparently physic, so they could make an even bigger deal with the Aelmari for their help in maximizing humans psychic potential, and humans can help them on the psychic side of thing. since this sems to be like Stellaris, getting psy shields and precognitive computers would be only a boon for the Aelmari. Besides all the other awesome science to be conducted on it.
For ideas..
One is some other race, perhaps a “fallen empire” (hedonists I say), is genusinly the largest in the galaxy (no concrete numbers kn what general high range galactic races are) is 100 Meters tall, and what psy power they has is apart of their biology that lets them operate that tall in the first place, which might be tall by galactic standard. Or taller, or more psy powerful, who knows.
Another is the use of wedge heels, might be an interesting conversation about the tech involved in making high heel foot where in general practical enough. Little workd building, mentioning the other extreme other races went to for their own version of it. Perhaps making a space in such heal to hide or store humans if needed. Or have some capture mechanism on the bottom, so when stepping on them it just put them into some storage jell. Or just so it minimize injuries, and lets bigs walk around and on humans with no risk.
And final one, moth girls, combo of two toes digitigrade, cute soft fur, and an extra pare of arms. Antro Mothra, but even bigger.
Hope this isn’t too much.
Author's Response:
"Hope this isn't too much"
I don't know if there's any author anywhere that would say a person has put too much thought into their work, thanks for reading and I really enjoyed reading your thoughts on it. Stellaris definitely had an impact on the general underlying story here. You are correct that the Aelmari are permanently altered in their reactions, those that were out to eliminate them underestimated what they would take from humanity and treated them as mere machines when they're beginning to become something more.
As for humanity's place I have an idea similar to the XCOM series where humans have a vast untapped psychic potential. What this means for the Aelmari, and other species, remains to be seen. Suffice to say the unseen master of the business suit ladies is in for a bigger fight than they originally thought.
Moth girls are definitely part of this universe but have only been mentioned in passing. Clara told people in the second story that she'd encountered them, but they haven't been in the main story yet.
[Report This]Date: March 02 2022 7:23 AM Title: Unseen Enemies Pt. 2
Fuck yes some Clara foot content
Really love the little side stories with the matriarch and Derek and Stella, it really fleshes out the world.
Not looking forward to whatever Elara is up to and that mysterious benefactor, the idea of collecting humans kinda freaks me out.
Really great chapter, pretty funny too.
Author's Response:
I'm glad you're enjoying it! The human collecting angle is meant to be a bit creepy, the implication is that Elara's race has been responsible for stories of alien abductions. Obviously they aren't up to anything pleasant.
Date: February 28 2022 8:58 PM Title: The Invasion
love it and can't wait for more. Want more insertion though with lots of detail but keep it up!
[Report This]Date: February 28 2022 8:11 AM Title: Unseen Enemies Pt. 1
This was a great chapter
I love that humanity is rubbing off on the Aelmari, I'm looking forward to seeing other ways they change
I don't know if it's me but it was pretty jarring to see Lyrei almost get killed, I was under the impression that the Aelmari were untouchable but I guess that's not the case anymore
Do the Glalans know that humans are tiny cause I can't imagine anyone would think that they would have killed the invading Glalans?
Author's Response:
It was pretty jarring for all of them, which is why everyone's a bit on edge. Up until this point it would have required something on the level of a battleship from most species to permanently put even a single one down, so yeah they are definitely a little spooked by the fact that there's an unknown species out there that is aware of them and can hurt them with handheld weapons.
As for the Glalans the ones who attacked earth knew humans were tiny before they landed, the ones coming to earth now do not yet know of humanity's stature, they just know they're "allies" of the Aelmari.
Date: February 14 2022 9:58 PM Title: Space Adventures 2
we need MORE!
And perhaps a bit more smut. Yknow, like the kind Clara has been alluding to throughout most of the scenes she’s in?
Author's Response:
Looking at this story compared to my others, yeah the next installment definitely needs more smut
[Report This]Date: February 12 2022 1:56 PM Title: Space Adventures 2
What can I say this story is phenomenal. The characters are just funny, unique, and so god damn likable. And the world you've crafted here is so damn awesome, I'm loving every minute of it. I'm very interested in seeing how this "adoption" works for the Aelmari as well as seeing more interactions with humans and seeing how these interactions bring out different behaviors from the Aelmari. Hope you continue this story now I've gotta go and read all your other works.
Author's Response:
Well to go outside the fetish realm a bit the Aelmari are dealing with a number of unexpected variables, the human pysche, resource scarcity in a post-scarcity society, and so on.
[Report This]Date: February 11 2022 11:19 PM Title: Space Adventures 2
Love the characters, love the interaction. Can't wait for more adventures with the four main characters, they have such diverse personalities that compliment each other well.
[Report This]Date: February 11 2022 9:59 PM Title: The Invasion
This started as a simple aliens and elves story, which is my kryptonite, and it even had a fun twist. And it's become a rather earnest and well written science fantasy that's more than a silly wank.
It's been such a delight to binge these first three chapters. I'mma check out your other stuff immediately. Thanks for your efforts :)
Which board may I find you on, anon?
Author's Response:
Thanks I'm glad you liked it! I'd like to come back and continue some more space adventures with these characters at some point. I'm on the gentle giantess thread on /d/ a lot.
[Report This]Date: February 11 2022 6:29 AM Title: The Invasion
Interesting story so far, am looking forward for more.