Date: August 13 2023 5:43 AM Title: The Invasion
Just wanted to say looking forward to the arc of this series maybe a look at human, Galans and aelmarl working together again the archons
Author's Response:
I do intend to continue this one at some point
[Report This]Date: May 08 2022 1:24 AM Title: The Invasion
DeLana is a very interesting character! I honestly do really like her as an antagonist, nice work! She really gave the Archons some style to them. Also McDonalds. Very funny. Keep up the great work!
Author's Response:
Glad you liked her, as the first Archon we actually get to see I hoped she would make an impression and maybe be a bit different from the antagonists we've seen so far. With this one I think that there's a sense of what the Archons are about and what they're capable of.
[Report This]Date: May 08 2022 1:24 AM Title: The Invasion
DeLana is a very interesting character! I honestly do really like her as an antagonist, nice work! She really gave the Archons some style to them. Also McDonalds. Very funny. Keep up the great work!
[Report This]Date: May 07 2022 3:00 PM Title: New Frontiers Pt 3
But what of the shrunken servitors?
Author's Response:
Probably treated similarly to POWs, I doubt the Aelmari or the people of New Aragon would just leave them frozen in the tubes.
[Report This]Date: May 07 2022 4:53 AM Title: New Frontiers Pt 3
Noice.
Minor disappointment they couldn’t have a fully intact Archon chip to revers engineer back on the word ships, but a wreck will suffice to get that sweet tech.
Date: May 07 2022 4:52 AM Title: New Frontiers Pt 3
I just caught myself up on this story! The setting is wonderful, and sometimes I find myself more drawn to it than the smut. Archons be strange. Absolutely loving it so far!
I haven't written in a while, but part of me wants to try something with the setting, dunno if I'd ever get it done though.
Author's Response:
The series page is open if you want to give it a shot, you could always make a short one-shot or something and see if it appeals to you, the setting is broad enough that you could tell almost any kind of story you wanted here. Glad you're enjoying the story, I have a lot of fun with this one, I hope the Archons lived up to the hype after being foreshadowed since way back in the second story arc.
[Report This]Date: May 07 2022 2:45 AM Title: New Frontiers Pt 3
Noice.
Minor disappointment they couldn’t have a fully intact Archon chip to revers engineer back on the word ships, but a wreck will suffice to get that sweet tech.
Author's Response: There might be something that can be salvaged from the ship, but the priority at the time was winning the battle and getting out alive, obviously with quite a bit of collateral damage. Overall though even if the ship and the station are flattened killing an Archon is a pretty impressive achievement for our heroes.
[Report This]Date: May 06 2022 11:42 PM Title: The Invasion
Just caught up on this story and every single arc has been an absolute blast. It simultaneously manages to be one of the most fun stories I've ever read on this site while also having surprisingly fleshed out character growth and world building. Can't wait to see what adventure these lovable goofballs go on next.
Author's Response:
Thanks! Glad to hear you liked it, I always have a good time writing the crew's space adventures and I think they've all come a long way since the beginning.
[Report This]Date: May 02 2022 7:34 PM Title: New Frontiers Pt 2
Another good chapter!
Author's Response:
Thanks!
[Report This]Date: May 02 2022 10:59 AM Title: New Frontiers Pt 2
Archon! I love the idea of religious zealots seeing the Archons as a godlike race. The threat of them is very interesting, too! I really hope we’ll be going to that homeworld (or home dimension) of theirs sometime.
Author's Response:
We'll definitely see their homeworld at some point. Archons have human cultists in most human settlements, though probably not as openly operating as they are on New Aragon, the next installment will have some info on them and how they operate.
[Report This]Date: April 28 2022 5:34 PM Title: New Frontiers Pt 1
This was really top notch. I especially loved the buildup to the reveal at the end and the bait and switch with Elara seemingly regrown. Looking forward to the rest of this arc! •r55;•
Author's Response:
Thanks! Hoping the rest of the arc lives up to expectations
[Report This]Date: April 27 2022 6:13 PM Title: New Frontiers Pt 1
Great start to the new arc. Love me some Multi size
Author's Response:
Thanks, with the exploration of psychic resizing powers this arc should have a lot of it.
[Report This]Date: April 27 2022 5:23 PM Title: The Invasion
Octosquid here!
The direction with psychic abilities is very interesting, but I see your concern with them. Can’t wait to see what direction you take your story in.
If you ever take your crew to Glalan Prime, I would KILL to write a crossover. If you’d like to discuss that, I’m in the discord server (Penis McAssface)
stay cool, Greenanon!
Author's Response:
I don't have any plans for Glalan Prime right now so consider it your "domain" haha. There are a few other characters from this story on that planet, mostly from the "Unseen Enemies" arc which you can use if you feel like you need them. I'm not on discord, might join at some point in the future.
[Report This]Date: April 27 2022 4:35 PM Title: The Invasion
Oh yeah the other psychic abilities could easily get really op is shrinking and returning to “normal” is but one reality altering ability.
Aslso could totally hsve conversations on the discord server.
[Report This]Date: April 27 2022 3:57 PM Title: New Frontiers Pt 1
A good start to another ark!
Well that happened to Jim, I suppose all this is general good recording for when humans in mass get psychic powers, or use them to even out with the inhabitants if the galaxy.
Author's Response:
I'm inclined right now to think that psychic powers only allow shrinking and returning to "normal," but even that would let humans approach the galaxy on more equal terms, not to mention all the other potential psi abilities.
[Report This]Date: April 27 2022 1:16 AM Title: New Frontiers Pt 1
Just when I thought this story could not get any better. Your taste and writing skills are excellent.
Author's Response:
"Catgirl Warcrimes" ah, I can see from your username that you're a fan of the series lol. Thanks for the review! Hope you enjoy the new story arc.
[Report This]Date: April 21 2022 10:58 AM Title: The Invasion
Octosquid here!
Alright I’ve got an idea. News is just getting out about Procerita’s fight with the Executioner. The footage from the spaceport had just been found and uploaded. The overhead camera had shown the scene in detail, sending mixed responses among our main group. The footage ends with Procerita stealing the Aelmari ship.
Author's Response: Yeah that's kind of what I was thinking, just a quick commentary, from Clara mostly, about how it's possible to beat an Aelmari in personal combat.
Date: April 18 2022 2:48 AM Title: The Invasion
Just a follow up on my post I was thinking on using a holstaur for the story to focus around with a human that gets abducted before the events of the invasion and then follow along the time line and beyond
Author's Response:
Sounds fun, I don't think I have a Holstaur type species yet so you're pretty free to go in whatever direction you want, looking forward to it!
Date: April 17 2022 6:35 PM Title: The Invasion
Hi I read your story and I wad wondering if I can right a story based on your world on wattpad
Author's Response:
Go for it, I would appreciate if you could post here too since I'm not on wattpad and I'd love to read it! There is a series page here that I think you should be able to add stories to.
[Report This]Date: April 11 2022 7:42 PM Title: Appendix: Worldbuilding info and alien races
This is great! I’m very glad you chose to add this and I will definitely be using it a lot when I write my upcoming chapter.