Reviewer: Tamekindofguy Signed [Report This]
Date: May 20 2024 4:25 AM Title: Chapter 1: Arrival

This was a great story!

I find shrunken coupleplay to be a very underrated genre (and among my favorite type of stories). So when I read the synopsis, I was intrigued and hoping to see some shrunken couple action. And my expectations were exceeded! The build up to the interactions was great with how you set up the characters and giving a few tidbits of action before going in on Chapter 5. 

The concept of this strip club is a fantastic premise. What I especially like is how you tell us how this Strip Club works really effectively in the first chapter to keep the intrigue going. And then adding more of the ideas behind this concept as the story goes along. 

Your writing is also incredibly effective at immersion. I really love how you describe the power and influence the Women have in this Strip Club. Like how Angela is incredibly manipulative in using her size to her advantage: telling the man not to look down to get his reaction and the way she held power over Erika and Marc. Or Kristen's no nonsense attitude and how she uses her power to influence people, like how she gave Erika until she is 4 inches tall to make her decision.

The actions happening were very imaginative too. I love Cherry's final act on Brandon as it was deliciously controlling and quite the finale of her part of the story.

Overall this was a great story with a lot of avenues it can go on a continuation. 

Ideas like Angela's desire to have Erika and Marc as her personal toys outside of work, and how unhappy she is with her punishment that came from Angela. Or Brandon's experience with Cherry and how that might affect him in the long-term, and what his bride to be would think of the oversized underwear.

Possibilities are endless! But nonetheless, this was a great story that hits a lot of marks for me! Thank you for writing this!

Reviewer: Feeover Signed [Report This]
Date: February 27 2023 10:11 PM Title: Chapter 1: Arrival

Great story, loved the concept and the characters. 

One of the best stories i've seen here

Author's Response:

Thank you! This means a lot to me. :)

Reviewer: akilmilo Signed [Report This]
Date: September 07 2022 5:06 PM Title: Chapter 1: Arrival

I loved wife foot scene,

Wife "cute laughter" scene,

Angela at the start of private hour asserting her dominance(butt flick and edging the couple)

And Rocio revenge scene.

Author's Response:

Thank you! Those were some of my favorite scenes to write!

Reviewer: bigfly20 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 05 2022 3:10 PM Title: Chapter 7: Amateur Hour

Really awesome chapter! The story is amazing. I can’t wait to see what the shots bring.

I do wonder if Erika gave such a good performance for the amateur hour that people want an encore. Will Marc happen to be on her so he might actually feel those colossal tits like they were an entire city?

Author's Response:

Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it.

I didn't do anything sizey with the shots, but I think it will still make for a fun adventure for the main character.

I hope you enjoy the next chapter!

Reviewer: DcZ Signed [Report This]
Date: May 04 2022 11:06 PM Title: Chapter 7: Amateur Hour

Another good chapter!

Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: Da Boss Signed [Report This]
Date: April 08 2022 11:17 PM Title: Chapter 6: My Wife, the Giantess

This is an absolutely fantastic story!  Can’t wait to see how you continue it.  Well done! 

Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: unknown1 Signed [Report This]
Date: March 09 2022 3:40 PM Title: Chapter 1: Arrival

One of the best stories I've ever read with the addition of chapter 5

Author's Response:

That means a lot, thank you very much!

Reviewer: DcZ Signed [Report This]
Date: February 19 2022 1:31 AM Title: Chapter 4: The Bachelor Bus

Another good chapter!

Another idea, the club can get actual used or slated to be destroyed vehicles, cars, buses, trains, plains etc. and girls use them obviously. Could be used in a rampage set, some kind of chase where the girls try and get the customer in a shrunken vehicles, or must watch them crush said shrunken vehicles. Might be interesting world-building to know what/if there are issues or differences in training are for such stuff, cause broken car glass at that inside soft tissue is probably not health if done wrong. 

And if they can all go that small, I bet that helps with city scale sets, or thinks that would normally take up and impractical amount of room/space. 

Author's Response:

Thank you!

I really like your suggestion! I didn't use it for this story, but I might play with this idea when I get around to a sequel for this story that I'm planning.

Reviewer: Pok420 Signed [Report This]
Date: February 11 2022 4:43 AM Title: Chapter 1: Arrival

Keep writing I will check back every day for an update for this it is a very promising story

Author's Response:

Sorry to keep you waiting for so long, but I finally got around to publishing the final chapter.