Reviews For Dani's Destruction
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Date: March 20 2022 2:36 AM Title: Chapter 5: Roaring Over Rutgers

If you were to polish your writing methods (as in the reading flow seems a bit unnatural sometimes) a little, your Story about Dani causing Destruction because she now can could be even more enjoyable than it already is.

I am not sure why her Belly grows each time she eats a singular person, but it's your story and your rules as how a giant's body operates.

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