Reviews For Old School
Reviewer: Carycomic Signed [Report This]
Date: April 09 2009 9:17 PM Title: Chapter.5: Family Secret
Date: April 09 2009 9:17 PM Title: Chapter.5: Family Secret
You seem to have more control over your text and dialogue over @ GTS City. So, maybe you should temporarily discontinue duplicating the story over here. Just spit-balling!
Reviewer: DX Machina Signed [Report This]
Date: March 27 2009 1:06 AM Title: Chapter.1: Sandra’s Secret
Date: March 27 2009 1:06 AM Title: Chapter.1: Sandra’s Secret
A very nice start, and a story with *gasp* plot and character development. I know, crazy, right?
Author's Response: I don't think it's that crazy. Pixis's stories have plot and character development but thanks for your praise.