[Report This]Date: January 05 2022 7:04 PM Title: Laura's Toy
Short and sweet; I cannot recall the last time I wrote a review as well as left a short story feeling pleasantly content with it. This was a great story, thank you for sharing!
[Report This]Date: January 04 2022 3:35 AM Title: Laura's Toy
Utterly fantastic story. Terrific concept and descriptions. I especially like the drawn out shrinking condensed to a few paragraphs rather than page after needless page.
Going back inside Laura would obviously be a "no brainer" for any tiny. Have to admit I saw that coming by the way you wrote about his accepting his adoration and submitting to Laura.
My only complaint, your grammar, specifically your lengths of paragraphs and spacing {e.g. Even after a couple days of me staying in bed she’d say:
“Don’t worry, I’ll take care of my little man.”}.
That should have been all one paragraph, not two. {i.e. Even after a couple days of me staying in bed she’d say “Don’t worry, I’ll take care of my little man.”}.
That's just me nit picking. Your story is great, and I'm better for having read it. Please keep up the great work.
[Report This]Date: January 02 2022 8:59 PM Title: Laura's Toy
Wow, that story was amazing! I love Laura’s demeanor from the beginning. She was cold to him so he had to do extra to make her happy, and she was also horny and the way she starting using him before he reached his final size was crazy hot.
I also like how he blindly trusted her to a point. It kinda makes sense when you date someone out of your league, you would go the extra mile just to make sure they stay with you and not leave you for someone else.
But then he was dildo size and that’s where the true fun began. I love reading about being a giantess sex toy, especially when the giantess is super into it and Laura was perfect for it.
Also, that part where she kept him in her panties all the time was excellent. I would have loved to see more of that though besides just keeping him in her pussy.
Also, I think this story could’ve used more dialogue. There was lots of sexy action and I think some conversations or internal thoughts from Laura would’ve benefited here.
Either way, this story was fabulous and super erotic. I would love to see a longer story with the same ideas and see how that unfolds. Anyway, great story and I can’t wait to read the next one!