[Report This]Date: January 02 2022 2:03 PM Title: Pushing Boundries
I love the way she so easily discards of him in the end. All in all, a really good story again Zude!:) *applause*
Author's Response:
Thanks so much Shaman! :)
Date: December 31 2021 4:47 AM Title: Pushing Boundries
Aside from the almost cuckold aspect {not into some guy more interest than me or getting what I am not; but that's just me} you have a pretty good story.
I especially like when Autumn realizes she has abused Aiden to a point of no return and simply swallows him.
Aiden's shrunken size is a bit confusing though. From the size of an ant to the size of a piece of gum, just how small is he?
Regardless, a very enjoyable story and look forward to more of your work.
Author's Response:
Great feedback, really appreciate you taking the time to give some, and I'm especially glad you enjoyed it!
Aiden is about an inch in height! I definitely agree with the criticism, I should have been much more clear on his size. I like leaving it slightly vague, but it was too much in this case.
Date: December 30 2021 9:58 PM Title: Pushing Boundries
1st a note: everything from "An original story wrote on commission." to "https://ko-fi.com/rudezude" is written in a color that for me at least is basically unreadable (near white on a white background...)
That being said, I can see why somebody paid for this, good job!
Author's Response:
Appreciate you letting me know! I wasn't aware it was so hard to read!