[Report This]Date: March 23 2022 11:37 PM Title: Chapter 7
Great chapter and an amazing chapter ending. Super excited for more!
[Report This]Date: March 18 2022 11:47 AM Title: Chapter 7
I like how you inverted the initial size relation and is using it to show how John’s assumptions about Airy and fairies were wrong and biased. I also like how Airy, in a clumsy and dumb way, show real care for John. The duo dynamic is both comic and endearing sometimes, makes you really hope John come to see Airy in a more positive light.
And who knows? John said he doesn’t like man, but is full of biases. What if he ends up liking his experience with Airy and Tug? It also feels like you are building up some mysteries about who commands the fairies and how they live.
Thank you for sharing your story, I am invested and hope to see more of Airy and John soon. 10 out of 10 so far.
On a final note, sorry for any misspelling. Although I am fluent in english, it is not my primary language.
[Report This]Date: February 15 2022 9:17 PM Title: Chapter 5
Love the story! Hope it's a lenghty one ;) x
[Report This]Date: January 28 2022 2:41 AM Title: Chapter 1
Another great chapter! Looking forward to where it goes from here.
[Report This]Date: December 28 2021 5:40 AM Title: Chapter 1
I really enjoyed this and seeing where it goes from here! You did a good job characterizing the fairy, I totally get the impression he wants to be nice and doesn't understand... Which lines up with your description of them perfectly! Took a look at what's planned for the next couple chapters, and I'm looking forward to it! Nothing like getting personal with a big bum!
Author's Response:
Glad you enjoyed it. a86;a039;