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Reviewer: D W Signed [Report This]
Date: December 21 2021 4:35 AM Title: Years Under Natalie (Part 3)

This may be deprived, but it is every shrunken anal tiny's dream come true.


Love the French Anal Kisses.  Nice touch {but isn't that what most of us derriere worshipers desire?}


Very nice ending to such a story.  Well done, both grammatically and story wise.

Great story.  BRAVO! 



Author's Response:

Glad you enjoyed it!

Reviewer: D W Signed [Report This]
Date: December 18 2021 5:42 AM Title: Years Under Natalie (Part 2)

What a terrific chapter.  What a dream come true for all of us worshipers of female ass.

I really like how he is completely devoted to being her waste eater, and how much he has been transformed into her toilet and both needs and desires her poop to survive.

Excited for the next chapter(s).

Reviewer: D W Signed [Report This]
Date: December 15 2021 3:17 AM Title: Your Perverted Destiny?

Turn to the right! 

The girl being covered in her own waste takes time to accept; but for the guy, the reader who is the guy, what a simple decision. 

Wish we knew more about how Natalie looks.  Her body style, measurements, and overall appearance; but then again, as you stated in a previous response, it leaves open to the imagination the endless possibilities.

Hopefully he, us the readers, decides to turn to the right and Natalie's booty.  Excited to see what happens next.



Author's Response:

I think you'll be pleasantly surprised with where the story goes :)

Reviewer: teradonk Signed [Report This]
Date: December 15 2021 12:50 AM Title: A Shit-Ton of Sex

I love your entries on this story! Something you don't see a lot of is a tiny getting sexually engaged with giantess shit. I know the male character isn't really tiny, but the idea's there, and it's hot. I dunno why, but the idea of an inch tall or less man being forced to fuck a giantess shitty ass, or being pushed in there and forced to cum is so smoking. Like 30 Days in the Hole. !!!!! oh well, i'm weird. Thanks, hope you continue to write and post!

Author's Response:

Thanks for the kind words, I'm glad you enjoy it!  I was worried upon my first publishing that this story would be too much and went too far, even for people interested in the fetish.  I'm glad to hear that's not the case!

:)

Reviewer: D W Signed [Report This]
Date: December 14 2021 3:15 AM Title: A Shit-Ton of Sex

For some reason my comment locked up when I copied that quote from your story into my comment.  C'est La Vie

What I wanted to comment further about is the size of the guy.  In the description he is anywhere between 1' and 2'-9" {I think that's what it is listed as in the story description.  I could be wrong}.  His size is probably stated at writing.com; but it's not called out here.

I have a writing.com account, but have long since lost my password and can not access it {"D W" here is the abbreviation of "Dark Writer" at writing.com.  For what ever reason I lost the ability to use "Dark Writer" at this site}.  I could always create a new account at writing.com; but so would necessitate everybody else curious as to the guy's size in this story at this site.  Just a few things to consider when continuing a story from a link to another website.

That said, you have quite a terrific scat story despite the lack of size caparison between the characters.  The content of your story is very good, with lots of poop and farts descending upon the guy.

The reason I like that ending {which I tried to quote, but got locked out of} is that he realizes he does love her ass, farts and poop included.  One has to ponder, wouldn't I love her ass, farts and poop as well if in his position?

Hope you continue this.  Well done!




Author's Response:

Hi DW-- Thanks for the feedback, I'm glad you enjoy the story so far!

I think the issues with the link may have to do with a few changes writing.com has made over the past few years.  The main one is that they essentially make their website total trash for anyone without an account, and only slightly better for people with free accounts.  It's a terrible thing to see their website begin to put up a soft paywall, which is the main reason why I want my chapters to be posted on a site like this one where anyone can access it.  I'll be adding the rest of my chapters here over the next few days, but I've been taking some time to review them before posting.  This story will have an ending posted eventually.

I really appreciate your comments about the height of the guy, and I've made a few changes to the chapter's notes to include some more information about the size.  The original interactive was intentionally very vague about the specific size of the character, most likely so that anyone could feel welcomed to add chapters to it.  For my storyline, I went within the range of 1'-3', in order to make it possible for the character to be easily dominated and overpowered by Natalie, but not so small that they could easily escape.  I'll try to add some more context to my other chapters as I review and post them, but will definitely keep your comment in mind the next time I write something new :)

Reviewer: D W Signed [Report This]
Date: December 14 2021 2:57 AM Title: A Shit-Ton of Sex

Your link does not seem to be working.

As far as scat stories, this was pretty darn good.  I especially like "
Finally, Natalie made a noise when she let out one last tiny fart that hit you point blank in the face. You breathed it in and immediately smushed your face against her asshole, like a sponge trying to absorb as much stink as possible.

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