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Reviewer: iambeowulf Signed [Report This]
Date: December 08 2023 12:14 PM Title: Meg Mayhem

Trying to commission you but it says your Twitter name is invalid. Please help!

Author's Response:

Here's a link to my profile: https://x.com/EdgerickTheTiny?t=6JIl1cguj5x9-iPGim8Nwg&s=09

Reviewer: daKatzman92 Signed starstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 07 2023 8:46 PM Title: Champion-Shrink Bout

Mmm... I am conflicted on this...

On one hand the story is well written in terms of characterizations and voice, but that ending...

All I'll say is that there are certain expectations when using certain devices for stories like this - and while I understand it was likely due to a word limit and the fact it was a commission - that ending just killed it for me.

Premise and beginning was really good: the stages of denial, the small little details here and there...

Just that ending. It just felt way too sudden, for that method of shrinking.



Author's Response:

I can definitely understand that. I'm sorry it ruined it for you, but I feel having the shrinking be sudden lends it far more cruelty than a slow shrinking, and the ending being ambiguous to Sami's horrible fate is meant to let your imagination fill in the gaps.


Sorry again that it ruined your enjoyment.

Reviewer: Tiny_T3 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 26 2022 4:40 PM Title: The Devastation of the "Demon Child"

Oh my GOD this was too perfect. My two favorite things: people getting mistaken for bugs and Robin. 10/10

Reviewer: Derivergi Signed [Report This]
Date: March 19 2022 8:09 PM Title: Meg Mayhem

That Gamo story was so nice, wish more people used nagatoro side girls in size scenarios 

Reviewer: Odysseus Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 18 2022 3:21 AM Title: Yoga With Yukari

Loved both Persona stories. You might consider changing the overall description of the story to say what kinds of content are in the different chapters. Right now the story description really just describes content of first chapter, doesn't indicate there are Persona stories in here for instance.

Reviewer: D W Signed [Report This]
Date: December 13 2021 5:17 AM Title: Meg Mayhem

Kind of like "Alien 2: Aliens" only with Giantesses, quite nice.

You probably could have drawn it out longer, with more descriptions of each death.  Still quite good.

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