[Report This]Date: September 26 2022 3:05 PM Title: Chapter 1
Is the story abandoned
Date: May 10 2022 12:43 PM Title: Chapter 1
Looks like an amazing story, hope you continue
Date: May 10 2022 12:43 PM Title: Chapter 1
Looks like an amazing story, hope you continue
[Report This]Date: March 01 2022 1:22 PM Title: Chapter 6
Daron’s empathy is captivating – the way he worries if Liz and Vicky ara alive (even though their deaths would mean all this problem is solved) is an example of the good writing - of show, don’t tell.
Liz and Vicky believe their situation to be like a camp trip and that king Constantine will help. As for Daron, he seems to see them as children, giantesses yes, but not as woman.
What I mean by that is right now the stakes aren’t high. But we see the begining of changes when Daron can’t help remember Liz feet when in bed with his wife... I reckon Daron also like big feet... another good point of his character 😉
So he is bounding with the girls... what about Liz and Vicky? How will each like the visit to Daron’s house and Family? Maybe seeing how Daron and his wife care for each other and their childrens will bring up a warmth they both laked in their previous life (but in different ways), maybe some will be impressed or jealous of his family, of his wife, of
his life.
All that in the most juvenile and clumsy way, as if they were still at home, because I fell both have yet to realise the consequences of a simple grip or a single step the wrong way. Maybe Liz will end up destroing Daron’s home, his family will have to move to a friends house while he stays behind to rebuild the place... with Liz and Vicky.
I think three lives are about to change, the problem is how.
Thanks for the kind reply to my last comment. And thanks for
sharing your writing. I will be eagerly waiting the next developments.
Author's Response:
Aye! Hello again! :)
it’s great to hear from you. Yeah Daron is just trying to understand all the variables that are presented in front of him. Can’t blame the poor dude.
I would say he definitely sees them as women given the line about him being young and having kids already (medieval-esque time period) but simply sees them as immature and reckless for women.
Liz and Vicky will definitely see and deal with the consequences of being giants as we have seen with Daron noticing an animal crushed under one footprint. Maybe next time it’s not an animal who knows?
Next chapter will deal with them meeting and some flashbacks so looking forward to hearing from ya again! Thank you for being patient with us! Ik it’s been a while since our last chapter.
thanks again for the review man!
[Report This]Date: March 01 2022 11:05 AM Title: Chapter 6
It’s a very interesting idea. I hope to see a positive relationship between our male lead figure and the giantess. But that’s more speculation then review.
for the actual review portion, you two have done an amazing job at having a good amount of detail occur without too much or too little. The dialogue is nice, sometimes a bit much but overall done well. Looking forward to more.
Author's Response:
Thanks so much man. Glad you are liking the story so far. We will try to dial it down with the dialogue as you pointed out but stay tuned cuz we going to be picking up the pace in upcoming chapters ;)
thanks again for the review! Hope to hear from ya again!
Date: January 25 2022 10:02 PM Title: Chapter 5
Hopefully this story continues can't wait to see where it goes I'm still reading
Date: January 10 2022 12:18 AM Title: Chapter 5
Great addition, I like how they're starting to realize how powerful they are and how they're now the top predators
[Report This]Date: December 18 2021 5:39 PM Title: Chapter 4
Daron appears to be a normal man turned hero by circunstances against all odds. It’s classic and I like it. Liz and Vicky are also normal girls dropped in a larger than life adventure and seem to be good at heart... but I guess we are talking about them in a “normal” life daily basis, which doesn't involve every step you take causing earthquakes.
The giantesses will have to be feed, they will have to shower and will have other needs and desires, after all we are talking about two modern girls transported to a medieval setting. Metting their standards as well as the standards of the king and it’s ludicrous and scared subjects, that all will be Daron’s responsibility – his challenge as the hero.
Allright. But what about the heroines? That will depend on how well they manage, not only do adapt, but to understand their position and the position they put Daron in relation to his life before them.
We already had glimpses of how much the two girls are unaware of the destruction and fear they cause, even with their voices alone. While not evil now, both are clearly self-centered and we still have to see more about how each react to the new situation to have a more clear Picture. What I can say for now is that they spell danger and gigantic shenanigans for Daron.
I think especially Liz will need Daron’s help to do and learn things, both because of her privilleged upbring and because Vicky seems to be too independent... This could mean Daron will have an easier time dealing with Vicky while Liz might feel envy and alienation.
All in all, the writing so far feels natural, the main characters are stablished... and two of them are barefeet giantesses taller than trees. What more could I ask for except for more chapters?
Thank you both, ReclaimerChief17 and Kickyou, for sharing your writing. I will eagerly await the next chapters. Also, sorry for any misspelling. Although I am fluent in english, it is not my primary language.
Author's Response:
Wow! Thank you so much for the comment! THIS is what I wanted to see 🥺 Glad to see people like you are enjoying our work. You only inspire us to write more! Yes the idea of two normal sized girls being transported into a tiny and more primitive world only opens the door for so many opportunities and communication dynamics. And I hope people are noticing the differences between Liz and Vicky Bc different giantesses and viewpoints allow for a more complex story. I hope to hear more from ya soon :) thanks again for the comment!
Date: December 11 2021 2:48 AM Title: Chapter 1
Minor comment:
Don't bother rewriting, but these 'Lilliputians', so to speak, would not be almost inaudible to these girls. Small organisms like mice can definitely make loud noises. I felt you should know for any other works that you may write.
Date: December 11 2021 1:28 AM Title: Chapter 1
Great chapter, things really seem to be ramping up. Glad the girls didn't just start stomping immediately. It'll be interesting to see how the kingdom reacts to them, and what the girls plan on doing next.
Date: December 04 2021 9:52 AM Title: Chapter 1
Nice setup! I am expecting lots of action these next few chapters with Liz and Vicky. I am wondering what Daron’s value to the story is. You seem to talk a lot about him, but I guess I’ll just have to stay tuned to find out.
[Report This]Date: December 01 2021 6:06 AM Title: Chapter 1
This looks promising and is definitely a welcomed sight to see on this site. Guess they are skipping along on the Gulliver-a type of start with no bondage, all limbs are free and ready for action.
With two of them this will also help the dynamics among their encounters.
I hope the two of you can make magic with the two of these lasses.
Author's Response:
Thanks man! Reviews always help motivate us to keep going :)