[Report This]Date: January 01 2022 2:03 PM Title: Chapter 5: Endgame
"This chapter contains sex, profanity and astrophysics!" - I laughed harder than this than anyone ever should.
“-Could stop her Goddess wife from biting this very planet in half if he chose” - Shouldn't that be a "his Goddess wife"?
I didn't expect Mio to be something alike Alice/Tom's "Silver Surfer".(Even the eating the Planet-thing fits that Galactus-like Narrative.) But it's more fun if they didn't directly create their latest toy, I guess...
I don't know what's meaner. Alice just stealing a star or Tom annihilating anything with a hell-lot of a delay.
Author's Response:
“-Could stop her Goddess wife from biting this very planet in half if he chose” - Shouldn't that be a "his Goddess wife"?
Another embarrassing error! Fixed now.
I didn't expect Mio to be something alike Alice/Tom's "Silver Surfer".(Even the eating the Planet-thing fits that Galactus-like Narrative.) But it's more fun if they didn't directly create their latest toy, I guess...
"Silver Surfer" - I like that reference! I am in the process of writing the chapter on how Mio joined them...
[Report This]Date: December 21 2021 3:42 PM Title: Chapter 4: Domination Victory
So know it's from Tom's Perspective now. Do I sense some "Biggo Bias" here?
“I’m sure my wife won’t mind if I use you to relieve my long-term sexual frustration. I’m sure she will never find out anyway” - Long-term misses the "-" in your text. Somehow this is is the most unbelievable thing in the story so far. Even if it wasn't just a thin guise for "I want to fuck with you, Alice."; the claim that his wife wouldn't find out if he fucks with a hundreds of meters tall giantess whilst being thousands of miles tall himself is let's say fairly optimistic.
"When I finished myself off I grabbed both Alice and Mio from my sagging dick and[...]" "I repeated as I carefully lowered Alice and Mio to the ground,[...]" - Her name isn't Mia. ;)
I expected Alice to one-up Tom yet again on a planetary scale. And I like "Twice Teeny Tiny Tom" a nice alliteration.
Author's Response:
Oh no, you're right! I got Mio's name wrong! That is embarrassing. Have fixed that now.
the claim that his wife wouldn't find out if he fucks with a hundreds of meters tall giantess whilst being thousands of miles tall himself is let's say fairly optimistic.
Must have been a wife from a very far away universe...
I know, the increasingly paper thin explanations are just building up to the finale...
[Report This]Date: December 16 2021 11:17 AM Title: Chapter 3: A New Player
"[...], sending ripples and shockwaves larger than any earthquake on record[...]" - Come to think of it what does this latest game to the world at large? I haven't thought about the (un)godly amount of displaced water so far...
"Do you have any last words to say about my choice of spouse before I ruin your entire day, Teeny Tiny Tom, Mini Admiral of the flimsy fleet of the Amalgamated Navy?" - I feel honored. ^^
Well, I can't say I saw that one coming. Like at all. I wonder how Alice will react as that looks like quite blatant rule-breaking to me...
Author's Response:
"Come to think of it what does this latest game to the world at large? I haven't thought about the (un)godly amount of displaced water so far..."
The world probably isn't going to be able to survive their escalating size changing shenanigans for very long.
I feel honored. ^^
Found a way to incorporate the line in the story! I like it so very much...
Well, I can't say I saw that one coming. Like at all. I wonder how Alice will react as that looks like quite blatant rule-breaking to me...
Don't worry, Alice will soon even the score again!
[Report This]Date: December 06 2021 10:06 AM Title: Chapter 2: A Goddess’s Game
This site could really use an alarm function of sorts...
"Little Tiny Tom, Tiny Admiral of a tiny fleet." - I would've used "Teeny Tiny Tom, Mini Admiral of a flimsy fleet." but that may be just me.
"soliciting" I just learned a new vocable.
Was Mio already in the first part? Tow Japanese Women appeared but I don't remember their names...
Another great Chapter but it surprised me that it wasn't written from Alice's Perspective - or do I misremember the original switching between the two each chapter?
Author's Response:
"Teeny Tiny Tom, Mini Admiral of a flimsy fleet." I like it. I should of used that one...
Mio wasn't in part 1 of this story. I recall some Japanese women at the end of the first Game of Sizes but I think they were both throwaways.
The story perspective will shift to Alice after a few chapters. This time around I am going for long spells from the perspective of one character. Bit of a change of style, maybe I'll go back to alternating later.
[Report This]Date: November 30 2021 8:14 PM Title: Chapter 1: War Games
The "Most Recent" Part of this Website seldom triggers me to squeal in happiness. But this time it happened. Now on to read the prologue('s first half).
"Admiral Alice of the Unified Navy as Admiral of the Amalgamated Navy" - Gotta love the intentional pointlessness the two put into this.
Well, Alice became way bigger than I expected/would've deemed necessary. Nice to see that "par for the course" still counts years later as far as this Series is concerned.
Author's Response:
What can I say? I love them big and overwhelming!
[Report This]Date: November 30 2021 11:36 AM Title: Chapter 1: War Games
You won't believe how incredibly excited I was to see this story! I absolutely loved the first Game of Sizes, it's one of my all time favorite GTS stories with one of my favorite fantasies/settings!
The story starts off great and I can't wait to read more :)!
Author's Response:
So glad that you like it, I certainly enjoyed writing it.