Date: May 08 2022 3:36 PM Title: Relaxing Atmosphere
You just gotta love Colleen's bluntness and determination to get what she wants, regardless of if her prey disagrees.
Author's Response:
In a way, I'd love it as a victim.
Date: March 19 2022 2:20 PM Title: Whatever happened to Stanley?
Wow, I'm starting to feel bad for Colleen in this timeline ;(
Author's Response:
She'll have plenty more dining pleasure in store.
Date: March 17 2022 3:11 PM Title: Height and Haughtiness
Nothing gets past Colleen, she's sharp as a tack and I love that about her (as well as her voracious appetite for shrunken humans and leprechauns of course)
I'm looking forward to see where this goes next, It'll be interesting to see whether or not we, the observer, hop timelines again to see how things play out for the leprechauns or even eventually see the original timeline again.
Author's Response:
The original timeline is gone, but the ramifications of the change will play out many times, in many ways, and with new characters over time too.
[Report This]Date: March 14 2022 11:37 PM Title: What's in a Name?
Wow, wow, this only gets better!!
Let's see what happens in the next episode...
Author's Response:
Thank you, as always. Plenty more surprises to come.
[Report This]Date: March 12 2022 10:58 AM Title: Any old Pout in a Storm
Now I'm wondering... the young - and now tiny - Kenneth meets the young - not as younger as him - Colleen. She probably knows the 'legend' about the leprechauns, and suddenly sees a tiny boy. And has no problem showing himself her mouth when he asks for it...
What if it was Kenneth himself, in Colleen's past, who made her start enjoying the idea of eating tinies - leprechauns mostly? Interesting concept lol. Maybe if he just asked her to help him she'd do it and not show him her mouth, never coming to enjoy the idea of gobbling him (and other tinies) down her belly... what makes Kenneth the only responsible for the event he's actually trying to stop in the future.
Ok, I'm wondering too much! Back to waiting for the next chapter...
Author's Response:
You've been watching those science fictions about predestination paradoxes. I like to think, that on the original timeline, Kenneth hadn't sent his consciousness back in time yet. So Colleen's interest in leprechauns developed without this incident.
However, I do use the predestination time loop approach in a much later batch of chapters involving a new character. So you'll get to see it both ways.
Date: March 09 2022 3:32 PM Title: To an Earlier Colleen
Also in a meta way if To Catch A Leprechaun is Colleen's diary of vore, then her not even giving the leprechaun's much screentime on an individual basis means she likely didn't even learn any of their names, she just gulped them night after night.
I like that callousness, even if I'm just ascribing my own headcanon to her personality lol
Author's Response:
I guess to her, they were meals to be enjoyed and then forgotten.
Date: March 09 2022 3:26 PM Title: To an Earlier Colleen
I just read Milla's review so this is somewhat of a response to that;
I completely agree with Milla so much on Colleen's character and her callousness. Like Milla I do admittedly love to fill in the blanks of what happens to the victims after they're swallowed. It's something I like about this story, that it allows me to do that, everyone gets to have their cake and eat it too. The second comment I left on the story mentioned that I'm not normally into willing vore, but the way you write it and Colleen and the other giantesses personalities makes me really into even the gentler aspects of the story despite me being into the crueler, more graphic aspects of vore.
One thing disagree with Milla on though is how the leprechauns were handled -- I actually liked that aspect of how you wrote them, I thought it was fitting that their demise wasn't given much fanfare. The way I looked at it was, to Colleen, leprechauns are merely food. She doesn't conversate with them like she did Tarquin, there's no romance, and she doesn't even ask if they have names. From page 0 she's always fantasized about making them food and that reflects in how differently her attitude is towards shrunken humans and leprechauns. Tarquin was her little romance, and the leprechaun were just snacks. That's just my own personal headcanon for why there's not much detail given onto the leprechaun's time with Colleen.
Like with the fate of the vored, I also very much enjoyed filling in the blanks on the leprechauns. Inspired by how you write vore, I liked to imagine that even if they were initially distraught at their lives being upturned by the human woman, when their time came to be eaten, a lot of them were actually very accepting of becoming Colleen's food, some asking Colleen if there's anything they can do to help her enjoy them more -- like wriggling on the way down. Many others felt it was unfair to the very end, like Connor with Edith, but nonetheless they all travelled down Colleen's throat all the same.
That's just how I filled in the blanks anyways.
Author's Response:
Looks like you've both done very comprehensive reviews on it.
[Report This]Date: March 09 2022 1:31 AM Title: To an Earlier Colleen
So, after reading the whole story (so far), plus the two last chapters posted today, I can now tell everything I think about the story lol.
The story has the known touch and feel of a Timescribe's story. It has his style, his preferences, his soul, and if one's already used to his stories, and likes them, so he'll like it too. Despite not being at first a frequent reader of his stories, I enjoyed that one. Mostly the last chapters, as the story began to vary more, adding more people and more dangers as Colleen admittedly began eating more than just leprechauns.
If, and only if, constructive criticism is allowed: I found it a bit strange that there wasn't given more details to the first time Colleen ate a leprechaun. I mean, I know that the story now doesn't spin around the idea of eating just leprechauns, but this was the reason Colleen started eating people and the main reason of the story existence, I guess. So I thought that, when a leprechaun was finally found, the scenes involving him would be more long, with more interactions between the leprechaun and Colleen, maybe even some romance (yeah, I thought it, sorry lol). But the leprechauns were just discovered and more than half of their kingdom was eaten in one chapter, with little to almost no descriptions.
Well, the story is now putting a lot of attention on the leprechauns, so maybe my observation is not seeing what is to come yet...
Also, another positive observation, something I enjoyed a lot: the fact that Colleen just proceeded with her normal life, as if nothing had ever happened, every time she ate a guy, be him human or leprechaun. I mean, she went on eating men, leprechauns, boys, for about two whole years or more. Timescribe is known for not caring about writing internals, digestion and all, but those who know my stories and style know that I love writing about those aspects of vore and, reading the story, I couldn't avoid imagining that, while Colleen had her life, the ones that ended eaten by her were digested slowly, being liquefied and turned in parts of her own body, a body which continued to swallow and digest and absorb more 'live snacks', eliminating the parts of the snacks it didn't need by the 'natural way' (no need to describe that here hahahah). This is so subtly callous for Colleen that makes the story enjoyable even for those who likes cruel giantesses: there's something more cruel than eating a man whole and alive and just living her life without a care about what will be of the poor man inside her acidic stomach? As I'm a writer who writes both gentle and cruel stories, I'm surprised to see a so cold girl in Timescribe's work, as Timescribe is known for writing just gentle/soft vore scenes. Yeah, the vore here is still soft, but when you go deeper in the life of Colleen, seeing that she's all careless about those who she eats... kudos to Timescribe, as it must be hard for him to write about a theme which isn't exactly in his comfort zone.
This is what I think, up to now. There's way more chapters to come and I can't wait to keep reading them! This story gets better and better, and with the time travel, now lots oh leprechauns saved and all, I can just imagine what will happen next!
Also, thank you Timescribe for the personal note, let's see what Billie Eilish does in this story... and how many guys she eats.
Author's Response:
Come to think of it, you're right. The leprechaun gobbling scenes were very lacking in detail. I think it's because I write as a human with a fantasy of being shrunken and eaten, and the presence of the mass leprechaun gobbling was to show the effects on Tarquin witnessing it, knowing that as their numbers dwindled, his time in her mouth and tummy were drawing ever nearer. Also the way she dug up and attacked their kingdom, after he'd been shrunken and taken refuge there was my other dramatic moment. I could imagine myself as a shrunken human being eaten, but having never been a leprechaun, I can't seem to throw my heart into writing about their denouement as effectively. Similarly, I find with comic book characters, that Batman, Green Lantern, the Flash and other earthborn characters are easier to relate to than Superman, who comes from another planet. But I do like seeing Superman team-up with Batman as a strong supporting character. I just used the leprechauns as a backdrop, first for Tarquin's POV and then to use the Ring of Reversal to unleash more plot developments. There will be some major ramifications of the Ring of Reversal in Chapters 115-149, when I get to posting them. It won't involve the leprechauns, but the time reversal effect will have some interesting side effects.
Well you've sure made an interesting observation about Colleen. For me, the callousness is part of the arousal effect, as wierd as this whole sub-genre is. God forbid that my church friends would ever see these stories, or anyone outside the giantess community for that matter. Anyone without these fantasies just doesn't understand how we writers and readers feel about it. For me personally, the fantasy ends the moment the tiny reaches the bottom of the giantess's throat. So I don't like to dwell on the digestive issues in detail.
And lastly, the Ellie Blish character based on Billie Eilish will pull a lot of mischief that leads to other girls/women's acts of vore, before she discovers the fun of it herself around Chapter 168. (I'm posting one chapter a day, to give readers a chance to read other authors' works as well, without being swamped by mine). Plus it keeps this yarn on Most Recent much longer.
Thanks for such a long and comprehensive review.
Date: March 06 2022 7:16 PM Title: Further Reading
I'm happy to see the Leprechauns back. They better hope they haven't underestimated Colleen!
Author's Response:
You're in for a very enjoyable (I think) surprise in the next few chapters, as you see who's underestimated whom, and the results play out.
[Report This]Date: March 05 2022 4:56 AM Title: More Valuable than Gold
What a shame, I was reading the story and didn't let a review yet? My bad, I'm sorry lol!
Well, I still didn't finish reading the story to the last published chapter as real life was being REAL BUSY (I mean it hahah) and I was having little energy/time left for enjoying stories, but this week things got lighter on me and I'm finally having time to read something without collapsing on bed hahahaha!
My favorite chapter so far is "How he made his way". Having the preteen boy wanting to be eaten by his own teacher and all the thing he did to accomplish his desire was pretty interesting, but I still have almost 1/3 of the story to be read yet, so let's see if it remains being my favorite chapter when I read everything.
Author's Response:
Thanks for saying so. It's up to 154 chapters in my manuscript, with plenty of twists and surprises to come.
If I were that boy, I'd be trying everything to bring it about too, along with a time trick or a teleporter to undo the effect afterwards.
Then of course, I could do it again, and again, and again....
Date: March 04 2022 2:52 PM Title: A Place to sleep the Night
Great end to this subplot. I really liked this idea of being eaten by a girl who already has a special someone in their life. That special someone isn't and will never be Connor, but at least he got to satisfy her in some way in the end!
Author's Response:
Well the idea being that to Edith, Connor was a dining pleasure and the special someone was a romantic pleasure. I don't play with this idea too often, for fear of causing moral conundrums, but I worked it in at least once.
Date: March 01 2022 11:06 AM Title: Extra Science Homework
I like this character, Edith.
Connor may never be her boyfriend but at least he can be her snack instead! I'd consider him lucky in his own right.
Author's Response:
I certainly would too. All the male characters are author surrogates of me at various points in life (although I've never been a private investigator, but the PI's encounters with the vore woman are adaptations of my own hopes and dreams).
Date: February 24 2022 1:52 PM Title: The Penultimate Pavlova
Aww, that's high praise Colleen gave Tarquin there.
I really love the oven idea, It's like Colleen gave Tarquin and the leprechauns their own little role and agency in helping her prepare them to be her food.
Author's Response:
The surviving leprechauns will be back in a few chapters' time. I've always thought that looking out of the oven window at my giantess would be a visual thrill of anticipation.
[Report This]Date: February 22 2022 1:58 AM Title: Interactive Cooking
Glad to see you're back and in good health!
Another great chapter! All those lucky leprechauns got to see the inside of Colleen's stomach and now Tarquin is next! I'm surprised none of the other leprechauns came back to save their brethren, smart of them as I think Colleen would have happily gulped them all.
I know if I were one of the leprechauns I would have offered to help her find more leprechauns, either being bait for the remainder in the tunnels, or help her locate others. I'd definitely be a massive traitor.
Author's Response:
I've actually drafted several future chapters already. There will be a rescue subplot involving the leprechauns so far still free, but I don't want to spoiler malfunction at all. So stay tuned.
Date: February 17 2022 5:20 PM Title: Streamlined Kitchen Appliances
I'm glad Colleen has finally caught her much longly coveted Leprechauns, I'm looking forward to her making meals of them.
Author's Response:
And you'll see that for sure, as soon as I'm back in full health. Sorry about the delay folks.
Date: February 05 2022 1:59 AM Title: More Valuable than Gold
Definitely was a surprise to see Brenda be the one to suddenly gulp our private dick (heh)
Author's Response: Yes he got deeply into solving that mystery.
Date: January 31 2022 12:57 PM Title: More Valuable than Gold
I like where this is headed with the P.I., this saga will certainly be interesting!
Author's Response:
I think it will surprise you enjoyably too. Thanks for the encouragement once again.
Date: January 23 2022 4:04 AM Title: Morsel Code
RIP Patrick. I love Coleen so much, and how into the idea of vore she is.
Author's Response:
Well I try to end the fantasy in my head as he heads down her throat, rather than thinking of the RIP aspect of it, myself.
But yes, I love it too.
Date: January 02 2022 12:19 AM Title: More Valuable than Gold
The build-up is killing me! I love it though, I'm looking forward to seeing Coleen give Patrick that one-way trip to her stomach!
Author's Response:
Several chapters of this intalment to go, and wait until you see what I do with it after that.
[Report This]Date: December 10 2021 5:07 AM Title: More Valuable than Gold
I didn't think I'd ever be one to enjoy stories with willing vore victims in it, but you've won me over. I love this story and the way you've written it, it feels fresh from the normal affair that I enjoy.
Author's Response:
Thank you indeed. As it continues, every avenue of interaction will probably be covered from very willing to not wiling at all and yet still enjoying it in some way.