You're far too kind, mate!

I really do appreciate it and I'm glad to hear you think so, especially in terms of the variety aspect. I did worry a bit when writing this new part that it might turn a few people off the story, given the shift in pace/content, however I think it's important to really establish who Sarah is before moving forward and I'm pleased it seems to have worked for the most part.

And I'm looking forward to everyone getting the chance to see where things go from here!

So it's the first full length story I've ever written on a public platform, besides a few interactive chapters on writing.com, but I've written a fair bit over the years, however never in a capacity that was worth publishing or that even warranted finishing. Therefore, the goal with this, from the start, was to post it, so that sort of spurred me on to completion.

I certainly appreciate that! Can't say I went into this seeking any kind of following explicitly, but I'm always game for community building if people enjoy what I write!

That's a fair criticism, man, and I'd be lying if I said I've not had that levelled at me in person a few times too, simply by nature of the way I talk haha. I understand your concern, and do appreciate that, however I also think that comes down to a difference in writing philosophy more than anything else. For the most part, I'm with you, but I'm also a bit of a fan of trying to challenge the reader's own vocabulary, at least in some small way, and that's been quite important for my own written development over the years. Most of the time, it's vital to keep thinks clear to the broadest audience, even if you're using more complex grammar or framing, as long as the words themselves are obvious, but now and then I think it's good to throw in something foreign to the reader's knowledge. Sure it might mean someone has to spend a few moments searching it up, but if that word then sticks with them and further expands the weight that idea presents, it can make for a much more memorable reading experience!

But anyway, no one wants to read an essay on the philosophy of writing from me lol, so I'll leave that there. I guess I'm somewhat with HelplessChime on this point, but I definitely get where you're coming from for the most part, mate.

I've gotta be honest, I had no idea I'd even managed that until you mentioned it?! I guess it could've been due to the typeface I'd used when uploading, however I'm not really sure why that would make a difference. I've tried to increase it on my end in the meantime, so hopefully that helps, but I'll try and see what the issue is.

And thank you!! I really do appreciate all the feedback, praise and critique alike! I must say, I've been a fan of your stuff in the past, especially some of the stuff in Rachelle's Sweat Pads, so it's quite surreal to hear such kind words from you!

You're far too kind, mate, and I'm glad to hear you think so!

Technically speaking, I've been writing stuff like this for the better part of a decade, but haven't ever intentionally developed something worth posting till now - besides a few throwaway interactive story chapters here and there.

I did want to try and strike a balance with Sarah, as I think, at the moment anyway, there's an overabundance of cruel giantesses who are just that way for the sake of it, so my intention was to make her a bit more of a utilitarian, I suppose. She owns the tinies and keeps them there against their will, which isn't exactly kind, but at the same time, she doesn't subject them to grim fates just to mess with them and does enjoy having them around, so it's more that she finds them useful to her, and that just so happens to be pretty unpleasant most of the time.

Anyway, I'll quit rambling now, and once again, I'm really pleased you got a kick out of it!

Thanks so much!

I’m really glad you did, and I sincerely appreciate the five stars!