Date: September 25 2024 3:26 PM Title: Chapter 1: The mistake
Like the previous comment, I really preferred the other version. Not only because now all the paragraphs are displayed weird but I also enjoyed the smoothing options.
Date: September 25 2024 3:26 PM Title: Chapter 1: The mistake
Like the previous comment, I really preferred the other version. Not only because now all the paragraphs are displayed weird but I also enjoyed the smoothing options.
Date: September 24 2024 10:33 PM Title: Chapter 1: The mistake
I really liked the previous version. My problem with this version is that it's broken. All the paragraphs are displayed weird and the empty blank space at the bottom of the page
[Report This]Date: January 13 2024 7:51 AM Title: Chapter 1: The mistake
Really enjoyed that last chapter! Becoming food or rather part of a dish and cooked (and surviving the ordeal!) is hot!
Author's Response:
Thank you! Had a lot of fun writing it :)
Date: January 03 2024 2:06 PM Title: Chapter 2: The car ride
I just discovered the story. Bring a tongue ring is an incredible thought, at the whim of a young woman's powerful tongue and mouth. Great writing skills!
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Date: January 02 2024 5:25 PM Title: Chapter 1: The mistake
Glad your back to writing, I enjoyed this. Still hoping for more smoothing. Especially when the people using Levi are unaware.
Author's Response:
Get ready for a new level of smoothing this next chapter :)
Date: January 02 2024 5:16 PM Title: Alternate path: ShrinkCon Part 1!
Interesting. I love that Levi got swallowed again. I wonder if while at the tiniest restraint if they will eat more tinies.
Author's Response:
Great! Maybe :)
Date: January 02 2024 11:53 AM Title: Alternate path: ShrinkCon Part 1!
A long wait but another great chapter, I'm hoping not such a wait next time but it's a great story! Please keep going
Author's Response:
Thanks!
Date: January 02 2024 6:49 AM Title: Chapter 1: The mistake
The story was very good in the first chapters, but the further it is going, it feels like ideas are just being recycled. It honestly got me to just skip parts, because i already kind of knew what was going to happen. It kind of feels like that holiday has been going on for months.
This part is just my personal taste/opinion and can be ignored :)// i really hope Levi gets a nice ending. i have nothing against domination i like it even, but the story is turning into just cruelty for him even if he's beginning to like it. The story is evolving into something where i cannot imagine he'll grow back ever, even if he does he's going to be completely broken. And if that happens, how is he going to face his family? Logically he'd not be able to look at them properly, besides most likely looking like a soulless human being by then. I'd be cool to see some kind of revenge actually, something where she'll understand what she did to him.
But you write your story and whatever you have in mind! I'm just some random guy on the internet!
Author's Response:
Hi guy from the internet!
Thank you for your honest review. I can see where you are coming from, it is one of the reasons it took so long for me to write a new chapter.
But I had fun writing it these past couple of days and I plan to disrupt their holiday, so it should pick up soon :)
Let me know if you have any suggestions!
Date: January 02 2024 5:15 AM Title: Alternate path: ShrinkCon Part 1!
Excited to see what is so special about the panties. Hoping Levi gets some time with her butt.
Author's Response:
Who knows? :)
[Report This]Date: January 02 2024 4:22 AM Title: Alternate path: ShrinkCon Part 1!
Happy to see this continued! Another amazing chapter. Thank you!
Author's Response:
Thank you!
[Report This]Date: October 22 2023 9:33 AM Title: Chapter 1: The mistake
One of my all time favourite stories so far. Just perfect.
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Date: September 05 2023 10:26 PM Title: Alternate part: A sticky situation!
Just brilliant! This nipple piercing part is another great part in this incredible story. Can't wait to read some more
Author's Response:
Thank you! In another week or so I'll finish the next chapter :)
[Report This]Date: August 27 2023 1:45 PM Title: Chapter 1: The mistake
Glad your writing again, one of my favorite authors. Love the unaware scenarios and the smoothing is the perfect vessel for that type of content. Hope to see some more feet related content. Smoothed into nail polish maybe?
Author's Response:
Thank you!! He'll definitely go on her nails :)
[Report This]Date: August 27 2023 10:35 AM Title: Alternate part: A sticky situation!
Love the Smoothing update! Hope to see more of it!
Date: July 23 2023 1:32 PM Title: Alternate path: Update!
great chapter
Author's Response:
Thank you!
[Report This]Date: July 21 2023 4:50 AM Title: Chapter 1: The mistake
Great chapter!
Author's Response:
Thanks!
[Report This]Date: July 20 2023 8:16 PM Title: Alternate path: Update!
Really happy to see you back with a new chapter. I really enjoyed it. Seeing the start of him starting to enjoy and accept the shrinking was fun, and at some point, I'd love for him to just admit he enjoys it, and that's when she grows him back, knowing she can shrink him again whenever.
The smoothing idea is really fun, and I would be so happy to see her smooth him to a buttplug or anal bead and use it, as I'd love to see some more anal play in the story.
But I'll enjoy it no matter what you do. Excellent chapter
Author's Response:
Thanks! I agree he's starting to get some enjoyment out of being her toy :)
[Report This]Date: July 20 2023 12:28 PM Title: Chapter 1: The mistake
A+++ writing
You're a creative artist and a cunning intelligence, and I appreciate you sharing your work with us!
Author's Response:
Wow thank you for your kind words!!
Date: July 19 2023 3:54 PM Title: Alternate path: Update!
Great having another chapter been waiting for this, excellent again great story can't wait for more please keep this going
Author's Response:
Thank you!