[Report This]Date: November 10 2021 1:07 AM Title: Chapter 2: The car ride
Loving every bit of this especially the last one. I can't believe he would get turned on just by being tormented by his own sister. I would love to read more of this. Excellent job as always
Author's Response:
Thanks Dawger!
Date: November 07 2021 11:57 AM Title: Chapter 1: The mistake
May I ask if the sister might get caught at perhaps the end? Dont get me wrong, this story's hot, but it kinda rubs me the wrong way the sister getting away with this, but that's probably just my justice boner talking. Also, how does she think it will go once they get back from vacation and there's nobody home and the entire place is just as they left it if a bit dusty?
Author's Response: Thanks for the interest! I'm sure that she will come up with a solution in the end :)
[Report This]Date: November 06 2021 3:24 PM Title: Chapter 1: The mistake
This is a great start. The scenario that the rest of the family won’t know that Luna has brought her shrunken brother is perfect, probably blaming that Levi is still a teenager for why he won’t text his parents. It will be fun to see what Luna does with Levi.
A suggestion would be an interaction involving the nipple. Either Luna would use it to make Levi more obedient by saying she would make him so small that he would get lost inside her breast. Or she puts him on there and puts a tight swimsuit over him. Letting her nipple harden to push his small frame against the fabric
Author's Response:
Thanks! He'll definitely end up in her bikinitop!
[Report This]Date: November 06 2021 2:28 PM Title: Chapter 1: The mistake
Fantastic start. I love that you're including jewelry and accessories. It's great to see someone thinking outside the box and not just doing feet content.
I love when the tiny is used as anything his Goddess wants.
Can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response:
Thanks! I agree, there's so much more that can be used to dominate tinies :)
[Report This]Date: November 06 2021 10:17 AM Title: Chapter 1: The mistake
Great start! Salivating for more.
Author's Response:
Thanks, nice wordplay ;)
[Report This]Date: November 06 2021 8:00 AM Title: Chapter 1: The mistake
Brilliant start to things so far!
The characterisation of both Levi and Luna is excellent, and the scenario itself is the perfect facilitator for a great many unpleasant situations - from Levi’s perspective, of course.
Out of interest, what sort of things are you expecting to include in this as things go on, mate? I know for myself, the tease about inshoe entrapment for a 10km run peaked my interest, but I assume you’ve got a broader sense of the things Luna wants to do?
Author's Response:
Thanks!
Well, I want Luna to have a great vacation and just go with the flow to casual dominate her brother. So yeah, the inshoe entraptment will propbably happen :) If you have any ideas, let me know :)
[Report This]Date: November 06 2021 5:03 AM Title: Chapter 1: The mistake
Can't wait for more.
Author's Response:
Thanks!
[Report This]Date: November 06 2021 3:41 AM Title: Chapter 1: The mistake
Great stuff, mate! Will be there a next chapter for this?
Author's Response:
Thanks! I plan on multiple chapters
[Report This]Date: November 06 2021 1:21 AM Title: Chapter 1: The mistake
Great story so far, looking forward to more :)
Author's Response:
Thanks :)