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Reviewer: thegreatrizzo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 22 2021 10:40 PM Title: Chapter 3: Settling in!

This is a hot story! Love the interaction between the sister and brother. She is in control and able to live out some crazy fantasies.

Since she is in full control of his height, will she increase his height a little when her parents are not going to disturb them so she can more ways to have fun. Like growing him so she can suck his dick until he cums to show that he really belongs to her.

The watch and the app being able to communicate is interesting. It allows her to tease him more and figure out what gets him the most.

Author's Response:

Thanks! Yeah, she's in full control :)

Reviewer: Lupe Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 22 2021 3:10 PM Title: Chapter 1: The mistake

Does the shrink box only shrink and change what they experience? Or does it also transform? Like could he end up as her thong? Or even transformed into a part of her body like her breast or butt to be teased?

Just trying to see what it is capable of!

Author's Response:

That's a nice thought! That would give her even more options later on. Will think about it, if you have any ideas, let me know. You can also write me an email: yougts@gmail.com

Reviewer: Lupe Signed [Report This]
Date: November 22 2021 5:21 AM Title: Chapter 1: The mistake

Really enjoying this story. Very curious to see what Luna has planned!

I know for one thing, he seems like he may be taking a trip up her butt some time soon with how much rougher she is being.

Would she view him as a snack too and let him take the long way? I can’t recall if you feature that in your stories!

No matter, looking forward to more!

Author's Response:

Thanks! Yes I plan for him to take the long way as a piece of food. But she'll use the app to make it a bit more bearable for him ;) 

Reviewer: bigfly20 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 21 2021 4:53 AM Title: Chapter 3: Settling in!

Love this chapter! It is great to see that Levi is enjoying her sister a bit too much. I like the addition of the tongue piercing to carry him in her mouth. I wonder what other sort of places she put the bead. I wonder what Luna would think when she notices Levi’s erection. Maybe play with it to make him cum.

Since she doesn’t have her usual toys to please herself, she is going to need a new set for the three weeks. Maybe a new product pops out in that store. A dildo that is customizable for whatever a person wants to do to a tiny person. An inside compartment for them to watch from the outside, check. A tip point to allow them to feel it, check. A pod with liquid to shot them inside, check. There are additional features that can be added but she can purchase those later.

Can’t wait for the next chapter.

Reviewer: L200 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 21 2021 2:29 AM Title: Chapter 3: Settling in!

As a side side note, how much control does Luna have over her brother's size? A tad fucked up and gross, but what if she put him in her ass, he ended way deeper than she had anticipated, panicked, shrunk him even further and got him out with a fart?

Not sure what fetishes you want to explore with this story tho.



Author's Response:

Thanks! We'll see! 

Reviewer: L200 Signed [Report This]
Date: November 21 2021 2:13 AM Title: Chapter 1: The mistake

Mmmm... My post-horny self still wants her to get somehow caught just for the hell of it, even if it is an alternate ending, but still, great read.

As a side note, the shrinking process makes him not need to eat or anything, but it doesn't stop bodily functions, does it? I imagine him getting a bit of payback at her by shitting in her mouth or smth, dunno. 



Author's Response:

Hmm, I think the bodily functions just stops. :) An alternate ending could be an option though! 

Reviewer: Dawger2 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 21 2021 2:07 AM Title: Chapter 3: Settling in!

So many great scenarios especially the masturbation part. Hearing his own sister's moans is probably humiliating and gross for him.

Love to read the next one, mate

Reviewer: bigfly20 Signed [Report This]
Date: November 15 2021 5:18 AM Title: Chapter 2: The car ride

An interesting idea for something for Luna to buy is an earring depending on how small she can make Levi when she can use the device again to change his size. If the earring had a glass bead that was hollow and one way visibility. Luna could have herself hearing the little voices of Levi without her parents know he was there. There are other ideas but it depends on how small and how much control Luna has over Levi’s size.

Author's Response:

Great idea! Luna has pretty much unlimited amount of control of Levi's size, so keep the ideas coming! 

Reviewer: BreeAntm Signed [Report This]
Date: November 13 2021 8:36 PM Title: Chapter 1: The mistake

Loving it so far.....love foot play too!



Author's Response:

Thanks! 

Reviewer: L200 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 10 2021 10:24 AM Title: Chapter 2: The car ride

I see the butt tag <_< will we get him going micro in her butt or something like that?

Author's Response: He's defintely going in, but don't know how yet ;)

Reviewer: bigfly20 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 10 2021 5:12 AM Title: Chapter 2: The car ride

Great second chapter. I like that Luna knows already what she can do with tiny people and decides to make it extra special because it is her brother. A sibling bond like never before is growing.
The part that there is toys to use tiny people with at a stop is interesting. It will be fun to see Luna possibly seeking out more toys and jewelry to keep Levi safe while having fun with him.

Can’t wait for the next chapter

Author's Response:

Thanks! If you think of something she could use him with, just let me know :)

Reviewer: Dawger2 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 10 2021 1:07 AM Title: Chapter 2: The car ride

Loving every bit of this especially the last one. I can't believe he would get turned on just by being tormented by his own sister. I would love to read more of this. Excellent job as always

Author's Response:

Thanks Dawger! 

Reviewer: L200 Signed [Report This]
Date: November 07 2021 11:57 AM Title: Chapter 1: The mistake

May I ask if the sister might get caught at perhaps the end? Dont get me wrong, this story's hot, but it kinda rubs me the wrong way the sister getting away with this, but that's probably just my justice boner talking. Also, how does she think it will go once they get back from vacation and there's nobody home and the entire place is just as they left it if a bit dusty?



Author's Response: Thanks for the interest! I'm sure that she will come up with a solution in the end :) 

Reviewer: bigfly20 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 06 2021 3:24 PM Title: Chapter 1: The mistake

This is a great start. The scenario that the rest of the family won’t know that Luna has brought her shrunken brother is perfect, probably blaming that Levi is still a teenager for why he won’t text his parents. It will be fun to see what Luna does with Levi.
A suggestion would be an interaction involving the nipple. Either Luna would use it to make Levi more obedient by saying she would make him so small that he would get lost inside her breast. Or she puts him on there and puts a tight swimsuit over him. Letting her nipple harden to push his small frame against the fabric

Author's Response:

Thanks! He'll definitely end up in her bikinitop! 

Reviewer: Pdawgg22 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: November 06 2021 2:28 PM Title: Chapter 1: The mistake

Fantastic start. I love that you're including jewelry and accessories. It's great to see someone thinking outside the box and not just doing feet content. 

I love when the tiny is used as anything his Goddess wants. 


Can't wait for the next chapter. 



Author's Response:

Thanks! I agree, there's so much more that can be used to dominate tinies :) 

Reviewer: HerPetJ Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: November 06 2021 10:17 AM Title: Chapter 1: The mistake

Great start! Salivating for more. 



Author's Response:

Thanks, nice wordplay ;) 

Reviewer: Randomer000 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 06 2021 8:00 AM Title: Chapter 1: The mistake

Brilliant start to things so far!

The characterisation of both Levi and Luna is excellent, and the scenario itself is the perfect facilitator for a great many unpleasant situations - from Levi’s perspective, of course.

Out of interest, what sort of things are you expecting to include in this as things go on, mate? I know for myself, the tease about inshoe entrapment for a 10km run peaked my interest, but I assume you’ve got a broader sense of the things Luna wants to do?



Author's Response:

Thanks! 

Well, I want Luna to have a great vacation and just go with the flow to casual dominate her brother. So yeah, the inshoe entraptment will propbably happen :) If you have any ideas, let me know :) 

Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 06 2021 5:03 AM Title: Chapter 1: The mistake

Can't wait for more.

Author's Response:

Thanks! 

Reviewer: Dawger2 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 06 2021 3:41 AM Title: Chapter 1: The mistake

Great stuff, mate! Will be there a next chapter for this?

Author's Response:

Thanks! I plan on multiple chapters

Reviewer: frankstergirl Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 06 2021 1:21 AM Title: Chapter 1: The mistake

Great story so far, looking forward to more :) 



Author's Response:

Thanks :)

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