Date: April 22 2023 1:44 PM Title: Chapter 10: Full tour!
Another brilliant chapter, can't wait to find out what she has install for him next. Just love the way he is so close to other people yet they will never know only Luna. Keep it going please
Author's Response:
Thank you! Hope to post a new chapter every week.
[Report This]Date: April 18 2023 9:12 AM Title: Chapter 9: Into the stomach!
Very good story ! I love it ! Hard to wait the next chapter ! Good Job !
Author's Response:
Thank you!
[Report This]Date: February 26 2023 3:16 PM Title: Chapter 9: Into the stomach!
Just read this story again for the unteenth time and just love it! Please can you start writing more chapters I really want more pussy insertion and unaware from everyone except Luna
Author's Response:
Hi! I'm currently writing the new chapter :) Stay tuned!
Date: November 03 2022 3:00 AM Title: Chapter 1: The mistake
I'm loving the story so far! I would love to see an Alt. Ending where our "Hero" Levi gets some sort of retribution as I feel that sometimes it makes sense. Keep up the good work!
Date: October 19 2022 8:45 PM Title: Chapter 9: Into the stomach!
Been waiting so long for this great story to continue. Not huge fan of vore but this feels different to me because of the great stuff in the other chapters and protencal of what may come. Can't wait for me of this and hopefully more sexual orientation such as pussy insertion and body jewellery. Please keep this going I'm a fan of all your stories
Author's Response:
Thanks! Don't worry, he'll definitely go back being jewelry and more after the vore :) You can always join the discord id you have specific wishes and I'll try to incorporate them :)
Date: October 19 2022 5:48 AM Title: Chapter 9: Into the stomach!
Nice. I hope Levi does get sucked into the intestines. I love full tour vore. I wonder if he will be lost in a pile of poop, and she doesn't see him before she flushes.
Author's Response:
Thanks! Wel'll see ;)
Date: October 19 2022 3:00 AM Title: Chapter 1: The mistake
Really excited to see a new chapter. You did great with the vore perspective! Obviously hope he finishes the trip through her, just because her teasing is so much fun. Any idea when we might see another chapter?
Author's Response:
Thanks! I don't know when the next chapter is finished though, hopefully soon!
Date: October 19 2022 12:11 AM Title: Chapter 1: The mistake
I really hope Levi gets some sort of payback or justice for this bullshit but with as far as things have gone it seems unlikely there can be a satisfying ending like that since it would be hard to come up with something suitable that fits the story.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the feedback. I'm just trying to have a bit of fun ;)
Date: July 17 2022 5:48 AM Title: Chapter 8: Down the hatch!
Loving the story! Keep up the great work!
Author's Response:
Thanks!
Date: June 22 2022 5:30 PM Title: Chapter 8: Down the hatch!
A great story, not really into vore more a pussy insertion fan but like it anyway. Please keep it up well
Author's Response:
Thanks! I'm sure he'll return to her pussy once he's back out ;)
Date: June 21 2022 9:36 PM Title: Chapter 8: Down the hatch!
Nice. I really hope all the drinks make Luna forget about Levi. Especially if he gets caught in the villi of her small intestine so he has to spend several days in there without her remembering.
Author's Response:
Hi! Thanks! She will forget him for at least a while.
[Report This]Date: June 13 2022 7:08 PM Title: Chapter 1: The mistake
So glad I found this again! I read this a while ago and had forgotten about it. I just remembered the girls name started with an L and a vague idea of what the tags were. Spent about 10 minutes looking even with the advanced search.
Author's Response:
Thanks, but why the 2,5 star review..! lol
Date: April 15 2022 5:46 AM Title: Chapter 1: The mistake
What I find so fascinating about the story is the fact that, from my point of view, it's neither "Gentle" nor "Cruel." For gentle, the victim suffers too much, for cruel, the victim doesn't suffer enough.
For gentle, the sister is being too hard on our brother, for cruel, it's still the sister knowing that it won't “hurt" him.
I find the story funny because of this.
Author's Response:
That is really kind of you to say, it's the exact mix I'm going for! :)
Date: March 24 2022 12:56 AM Title: Chapter 7: In you go!
what is lunas end game. no way levi is going to just let this go when he gets regrown well unless you pull a porn plot moment and he doesn't act like a normal person
Author's Response:
Hi! Thanks for taking the time to comment on the story!
To answer you question; I don’t know yet. I’m just trying to have some fun.
But I got a lot of questions about the ending; maybe I’ll just leave that part open. But to be fair; it is porn writing in the end ;)
How would you end it? :)
[Report This]Date: March 22 2022 9:25 PM Title: Chapter 7: In you go!
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[Report This]Date: March 22 2022 4:39 AM Title: Chapter 7: In you go!
Excellent chapter. It will be awesome to see what Levi has to face in the future. He has this underlying feeling that is enjoying this and Luna is trying to pull it out. If he embraces it, he would love this intimacy.
Author's Response:
Totally agree, but when will he give in ;)
[Report This]Date: March 22 2022 3:12 AM Title: Chapter 1: The mistake
Wonderful chapter finally getting to him getting truly used by her. Was excellent and I hope you keep going, I look forward to more if you do. Really want to see him get to experience anal at that size
Author's Response:
Thanks!
Date: February 04 2022 4:46 PM Title: Chapter 6: Panty prisoner
Okay, so I think even if Levi was turned on by his sister, she doesn’t realize he was actually just in a bad spot when he found the shrink box.
I think regardless of her enjoyment with shrunk Levi that since she has experience being a dom for shrunken people that she would’ve made sure to check if he really wanted this.
It’s likely she thinks his panic is more of an act but when the trip is over, she’ll soon realize he was actually traumatized by all this when they finally talk. So… she’ll likely need to keep him away from their folks until she can get him to get himself together.
I would however like to see Levi get one over his sister and she’ll be the one to see how her playthings dealt with their experiences as a shrunken toy with Levi back to normal size.
Author's Response:
Hi! Thanks for your comments! Although I know what you mean, but I won't write the reversal part.. Let's see how this story plays out :)
[Report This]Date: February 04 2022 3:36 PM Title: Chapter 6: Panty prisoner
I'm really glad this is back! I love the teasing and everything about this chapter. It's sooo perfect! I just wish Luna brought along her brother during her run though. Still this is another one of a heck excellent chapter again, mate! Keep it up!
Can't wait for Levi to graduate as his sister's actual dildo
Author's Response:
Thanks!
[Report This]Date: February 04 2022 1:30 PM Title: Chapter 1: The mistake
Very fun chapter! Something tells me once she is finished using her new toy, she will have worked up quite the appetite!
Author's Response:
Thanks! Stay tuned for chapter 8 :)