Reviewer: Xiao-renzhe Signed [Report This]
Date: November 17 2021 8:34 PM Title: Chapter 7: SIMON SAYS... IT'S LIFE OR DEATH!

Hi there! I’ve been avoiding reading reviews for this one because I didn’t want anything spoiled. I intended to leave one to say my thoughts at the end of chapter 6, but you pretty much wrote exactly what my expressed desires would have been, and now I’m hesitant to make any predictions or suggestions whatsoever because I am more inclined to trust that I very closely share your tastes! And it’s more fun to be surprised by your creative inspirations than to endeavor to guide them with mine (I can just write my own darn stories for that).

Anyway, I’m loving this story so far. Gentle/safe/willing vore is absolutely my favorite around, and I always remark on how shamefully little there is when I truly feel like it’s more realistic that people wouldn’t want to hurt or kill each other for cheap thrills (not that I’m against fatal. Everything has its place). 

I enjoy the rapidity with which their mutual affection blossomed, I love that they went for it, and I like that there’s some risk involved because that just increases the thrill. Though I think it would be hours before any real damage could be done, I also get that most young adults gulping down their crushes aren’t biologists. Lol. 

Before this meanders too long, I’m very much looking forward to more chapters from this! I cannot wait to see Beck and Simon’s relationship grow and to see what Milla thinks about it, if she wasn’t secretly hoping they’d become an item anyway and left them alone on purpose due to secret suspicions about her roommate’s tiny “interests.” 

10/10! Thanks for sharing your craft with the community!

Author's Response:

Holy crap, Xiao-renzhe! Thanks so much for commenting, you're one of my favorite authors on this site!!

I absolutely agree that there's a dearth of G/S/W vore out there, on this site and others. Like your "Borrowing a Bite," I wanted "Fear and Delight" to be a romance first and erotica second; that meant that the characters had to learn to trust each other and genuinely care about the others' wants and needs and safety. 

(And yes, I know that Simon would've probably been quite safe inside Beck for at least a few hours, but Simon gave her a 5-minute window of guaranteed safety and she cares too much about him already to risk more than that, the sweet girl). 

Thanks again for reading, and I hope you stick around for more!

Reviewer: Wonder Signed [Report This]
Date: November 14 2021 10:48 PM Title: Chapter 6: SIMON SAYS... GIVE ME A THRILL!

You better bring Simon back ;(. If not imma be so mad and sad but this is soo good because why is this story making me feel that way!!!

Author's Response:

Thanks for reading, friend! And while I can't say for certain, the story's probably making you feel that way because that's how I wanted you to feel when I wrote it. 

I want these characters to feel like people; that way you can believe both their sexual chemistry and their romantic relationship simultaneously. 

Tune in next episode... you don't want to miss what's coming next!

Reviewer: Flagpole_Sitta97 Signed [Report This]
Date: November 13 2021 11:52 PM Title: Chapter 1: SIMON SAYS... HELLO!

I'm still kinda getting used to this new design that Giantess World is giving us, but this story is totally worth five stars. I'm loving these interactions between Simon and Beck, and I totally agree with you about reviews, I know how it feels to put out like 5 or 6 chapters in a reasonable amount of time and yet no-ones saying anything and you know you're writing quality stuff. Maybe you should have the next chapter have Simon do a full tour and kinda see him become closer to Beck heh heh, maybe to Milla's dismay.  Can't wait for more of this.

Author's Response: Wow, it's a real honor to get a review from you, Flagpole_Sitta! I'm a big fan. Sorry I never left you a review of your own, I'm a longtime lurker trying to get back into creating serious content again. Thanks so much for chiming in, and stay tuned to this station! More good stuff is on the way - count on it!

Reviewer: Sovereign Signed [Report This]
Date: November 13 2021 12:06 PM Title: Chapter 6: SIMON SAYS... GIVE ME A THRILL!

Very good so far. Very sweet interactions and moments. One thing i would critique about this chapter is to also let us see things from simons perspective too. The intimate moment between the two only had 50% of its potential because we didnt know how things were from simons perspective.

Like what its like for him inside Beck. How it feels, what he thinks and is doing. Maybe a chapter dedicated to his perspective on everything? :) loving the story so far.

Author's Response:

Hi friend! Thanks for leaving a few notes. Stick around: you might just get everything you want and more. 

Not immediately but... soon. 

This story's still got miles of road left to tread!

Reviewer: Pluto Pendragon Signed [Report This]
Date: November 08 2021 7:11 AM Title: Chapter 4: SIMON SAYS... KISS ME, BECK!

Wow, just wow!! This story has been exceedingly fun so far, I’ve tremendously enjoyed every chapter! It’s rare to see a gentle story that’s this high quality, and I’m loving every bit of it! I love it when the tiny is confident and has an actual personality, and Simon and Beck are so cute together. Vore isn’t even my thing really, but you’ve definitely been pulling it off well here. I’m really curious to see how their relationship develops from here, especially after Simon has completed his little expedition into her stomach! There’s so much potential here for a cute and interesting relationship, and I can’t wait to see where you go with it. Congrats on the great start, please keep it up! Take care~

-Pluto

Author's Response:

Hi there Pluto! Thanks so much for the excellent review. You've really hit the nail on the head with your comments: I wanted both Simon and Beck to be fully fleshed-out characters, so that any potential romance between them could seem genuine, even if it happened very quickly. The funny thing is, I originally envisioned Beck as the more confident one, intending for there to be a scene where she had to race against the clock to describe her desires to Simon before Milla returned... but when I started writing Simon's character for the first time, he turned out to be far more worldly and confident and the dynamic of the tiny being the braver of the two struck me as very novel... so that's how it ended up in the finished draft. 

Thanks for reading - there should be more very soon!

Reviewer: Jsmith20 Signed [Report This]
Date: November 07 2021 7:35 AM Title: Chapter 3: SIMON SAYS... LET'S GET CLOSER!

Man this story is awesome. 

I love everything about it so far. The characterization is fantastic and the descriptions are excellent.

I think its interesting that you decided to keep vore being fatal(I always prefer non-fatal for everything, but that's me), it does raise stakes, but also makes it harder on Beck. Then again it requires more trust in the relationship. 

I'm really looking forward to the next installment and seeing how the relationship.

Author's Response:

Thanks for the rating and review, friend! Glad you're enjoying. Not to give away too much - but while being swallowed whole is absolutely a dangerous proposition for any tiny in this continuity, I wouldn't be too worried about a quote-unquote "bad ending" to this story... just some good risky fun! Next chapter should be out soon.