Date: November 30 2021 1:17 AM Title: The Deep Dark
What a hot chapter! A nice ending which gives us a great idea of how their lives will be changed in the near future.
I think of all the chapters, my favorite was indeed the first one. Just that thrill of being in public while keeping Brian in her panties was something that kept me on the peak of my interest.
The later chapters showed just how horny this couple is, and I would love to read more about their adventures with Brian.
If Brian ever tries to escape and I’m nearby, I would gladly take his place, since this kind of contract appeals to me.
I really enjoyed this commission idea and would love to read more about any other commissions from them.
Anyway, great story and I can’t wait for the next one!
Date: November 13 2021 9:56 AM Title: Honey Pot
Once again, another sexy chapter! While, I still think the first chapter set the bar really high, this chapter was also really good.
I think we got a lot more dialogue in this chapter and we really got to see how Amy and Steve interact with each other. Just from their conversations, it looks like Amy is the one in charge, and that is amazing. Steve seems more of the supportive role here, but he seems to enjoy that role and watching Amy dominate Brian just like how we as the audience find it sexy to watch this all unfold.
Man, that first sentence got my head spinning with joy. I mean, the thought of being trapped in the crotch of a hot lady for hours with no escape sounds like a dream come true. And that’s exactly what Brian went through. I like how you even conveyed how Brian’s muscles were weak from all that time trapped with Amy. It just shows her powerful her pussy is to him, and I love it!
I did find it a bit odd that Amy got mad and punished Brian from a single protest from him. I was expecting more of a warning or a threat of what might happen if he complained. Could’ve been a good opportunity to showcase some naughty ideas from Amy.
Well, that punishment led to some butt entrapment which is nice and snug, just like Brian’s situation. Dude can’t catch a break. Went from trapped in Amy’s crotch to trapped in her butt. I love it!
Now it looks like Steve is going to become part of the show now so we shall see how Brian endures this.
Another part that I liked was that Amy said she was getting addicted to having this kind of control over Brian. I’m not sure if Amy is the kinky type, but I could see her tying Brian up to make him even more helpless. Or maybe she likes the control of keeping him inside her all day. Maybe after this sex scene, she might even consider keeping Brian inside her all night long. ;)
I can’t wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much again for the feedback! Glad to hear you're awaiting the next one! Plenty of action planned, with some wrap-up! :)
Date: November 04 2021 2:12 AM Title: Return to Sender
Love this story, one of my favorite paths of this particular interactive. I had always wished the Mochidas got something similar instead of the bait and switch they ended up with. You really took me back with this, great job!
Author's Response:
Thanks so much! Really glad you enjoyed the first chapter!
Date: November 03 2021 5:15 AM Title: Return to Sender
Damn, this is easily your hottest chapter yet so far. At least in my opinion. I mean, signing up to be a 24/7 sex slave to a sexy giantess is literally one of the hottest things that I could ever imagine.
It’s so crazy, because I could easily relate to Brian. The simple idea of some giantess fun like that would probably be enough to even convince me to sign that contract as well.
One thing that’s unique about this story is that it started out immediately with the fun stuff. It’s like that attention grabber in movies that happen before they reveal the title of the movie so you know that you’re in for a treat.
With this story, we first see Brian’s perspective as he’s used by Amy and Steve and then we get that short but sweet backstory on how he signed his life away.
I love how with Brian’s view, you described Amy’s pussy as something from hell, with his vision blurred, the heat and humidity and him choking on her juices as he struggles to breathe.
And then we get Amy’s view and she’s in pure eternal bliss, relishing every sensation as Brian thrashes inside her. You describe her body as it’s tingling with joy and she’s even trying to muffle her screams with her hand. And of course we can’t forget that she’s horny.
In addition, I love the twist that they are on an airplane, with other passengers! That is so hot! She’s literally carrying Brian in her panties, trapped against her crotch on a flight for who knows how many hours long and trying to avoid any loud noises for the whole ride. Man, I hope this is a long flight. Brian is literally flying into her pussy as Amy is flying to heaven.
I also just love the bathroom scene. The fact that Brian is just laying there in her used and moist panties gazing upon Amy’s magnificent state as she looks down at him as a toy is such a great scene you created.
Not to mention all the kinky ideas Amy has said on what she has in store for Brian. Poor Brian is just stuck there forced to listen to all these ideas while Amy gets turned on by them. I hope she has more ideas about keeping Brian inside her or in her panties too. She could’ve said that she was going to keep him in her panties for the whole flight and possibly for the rest of the day. You know what, Amy could even tell Brian that he could be sleeping inside her that night. I think you could tell, I just love panty entrapment, especially when the giantess loves it and the tiny is reluctant. So this is perfect!
I realize that Steve will also be a main character in the story, but I’m kinda hoping that Amy and Brian get most of the action, but that’s just me being biased. Lol.
Anyway, I just absolutely love this chapter and I can’t wait for the next one!
Author's Response:
Wow, thank you! That's super flattering, and I'm glad to get confirmation because I feel like I really nailed the whole sexy tone from the start. Oh and the fact that there are so many people around, oh my god, I totally loved writting about the public aspect of that! Something about him being tucked away, with dozens of people completely unaware of the plight is really exciting for me, and it was super fun to write!
Thanks so much for taking the time to review this, always get excited knowing you left one on one of my stories <3