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Reviewer: Mr E Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 04 2010 10:25 AM Title: Chapter 7

I Love it.  everytime he thinks hes got it good, something bad happens.  id love to see a continuation on this

Reviewer: dudeduderson2000 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 22 2009 5:12 PM Title: Chapter 1

Would love to see more of this!

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: March 13 2009 6:10 PM Title: Chapter 7

HA! What a brilliant plot-twist!

Although, I have to wonder if Elena's abducting him was motivated more by the thought of having a permanent foot-slave, than protecting her daughter? ;-)

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 13 2009 6:02 PM Title: Chapter 6

Well, at least you avoided the ususal "shrunken-man-getting-boinked- by-giant-prospective-mother-in-law" cliche.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 26 2009 9:36 AM Title: Chapter 5

Let me guess: Elena gets tired of waiting to meet Jake, and goes home. Ankle socks and all!

;-)

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 25 2009 7:50 PM Title: Chapter 4

Well, at least he gets to greet his future mother-in-law eye to eye.

Great chapter, all around.

Reviewer: rubber Signed [Report This]
Date: February 15 2009 11:31 AM Title: Chapter 3

cool chapter

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 13 2009 10:10 AM Title: Chapter 3

Maria's going to let her mother in on her "little secret?" Uh-oh!

Reviewer: Asukafan2001 Signed [Report This]
Date: February 05 2009 12:07 PM Title: Chapter 2

pretty quick turn around time on the chapter. Looks like jake is in for a long day.

Reviewer: Asukafan2001 Signed [Report This]
Date: February 04 2009 5:47 PM Title: Chapter 1

I remember the first one, i rather enjoyed that one. I can't wait to see what you have planned.

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