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Reviewer: iA-R-D Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 08 2022 2:50 PM Title: Chapter 1: Planetfall

For your first bit of size writing you hit it out the park and maaaan, this story is so perfect for me I keep coming back to it.

I went ahead and put it through some pretty good TTS, so here's those.

https://drive.google.com/drive/folders/12ouvaEyQmYUvoCMhLelZszflJkA4uKd7?usp=sharing


Reviewer: Inwiththebooks Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 14 2021 12:41 PM Title: Chapter 1: Planetfall

More big elf size is always a cause I'll champion, very well written! You're quite descriptive and seem to have a firm grasp on how to use imagery to convey the scale and sense of difference between Lyria and the humans as well. Which imo is pretty key, especially for extreme scale differences.



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review!

 

Trying to convey the sense of scale and destruction a giantess can cause is something I always try to get across in my writing, even though it can be incredibly tricky to describe effectively.

 

Though I hate to tease and make promises, I have been considering making a follow up to this series now that I feel more experienced. The world always needs more giant elf stories.

 

In any case, I'm glad that you enjoyed my work!

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