Reviewer: Mr in A suit Signed [Report This]
Date: October 12 2021 8:25 PM Title: Shift in Location

I liked the synopse and you made a solid first chapter, with a good description of Ernest. Something missing is a more thorough description of Katie, but it's only chapter one and I am guessing Ernest or someone will eventually want to take a closer look at our blonde heroine.

Something missing is a more thorough description of Katie, but it's only chapter one and I am guessing Ernest or someone will eventually want to take a closer look at our blonde heroine by ch. 2 or 3.

I am sold. I want to see how you will build this land of giants and giantesses. Do you have the whole story or parts of it already laid out? And, most important, can I hope for some romance in the future?

Yeah, I know you can't spoil things, but I had to ask kkkkk. I am already having ideas here of how this story might go... and how Ernest might regreet not having squached Katie when he had the chance... XD

And sorry for any misspelling. Although I am fluent in english, it is not my primary language.

Author's Response:

Thanks for the input.  I have a bit more on Katie in chapter 2, but looking back,  I do see what you mean on the lack of descriptors.  I think I'll add a little more as I find places to add it organically. 

 

I have a lot of the story planned out, including some of the rules that have already come into play that might be lurking under the surface.  I do have flexibility incorporated at points so that I can alter some events based on feedback.  It's somewhat similar to how I did Angie's Abduction back when that was still ongoing. 

 

As for romance, yes, but probably not in the way you're expecting.  I can say no more.  Shhh!

 

But yeah, hopefully the next chapter will be up soon.  I haven't been this motivated to write a story in a long while.