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Reviewer: Wutt117 Signed [Report This]
Date: September 21 2021 6:12 PM Title: Chapter 1

I love the detail put in, the description of her foot in the shoe and her moving it inside especially. I think you did miss some stuff though, like when Beth gets her legs crushed, perhaps you could have mentioned her seeing that they were crushed as she lifted her foot up again 

 

Would you consider doing another chapter with someone inside her sneaker?



Author's Response:

I have some ideas in the pipeline.    :) 



Author's Response:

I have some ideas in the pipeline.    :) 

Reviewer: Valanath Signed [Report This]
Date: September 18 2021 8:08 PM Title: Chapter 1

This is really good! I loved the unaware action with the mother unknowingly throwing her daughter out.

Reviewer: UnawareLover Signed [Report This]
Date: September 18 2021 10:18 AM Title: Chapter 1

I think it's very good, but I was missing a bit of the action, but still very good work

Author's Response:

I will try to do better next time with another Unaware story that I have in 

mind. 

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