Reviewer: minx_kitten Signed [Report This]
Date: January 11 2009 8:03 AM Title: Chapter 1

Hi Little Prince :o)

Can not wait to read further! I hope it will ot take long till I see what happens to you next...

Reviewer: gamergasteiz Signed [Report This]
Date: January 05 2009 6:39 PM Title: Chapter 1

Ok. I like your history. I like voyeur-unaware and the concept of adventure. It's a short story, as you said. I think there's no problem with long stories, as your wish. Ah, a suggestion: try to put some kind of dangerous inside the adventure. It's too easy to escape if you can change your height. Please, continue, and thank you.

Reviewer: bobsmith Signed [Report This]
Date: January 04 2009 9:41 PM Title: Chapter 1

So far so good! Keep at it!