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Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 24 2021 6:17 AM Title: Chapter 1

Tori either being shrunk by Trina for not appreciating her being such a great sister or by Jade for just being rude to that sweet gothic angel seems fair.

 

Jade did not deserve that though.

Reviewer: FrequentlyImprobable Signed [Report This]
Date: August 23 2021 5:04 AM Title: Chapter 1

I love this, the writing is solid, the situations are unique but also classic, and you go fast enough to keep the reader interested but also just slow enough to focus on details. I really hope you make another chapter of this, it's too good to just leave on a cliffhanger. Maybe Tori shrinks again and she has to try and get mom's attention, or Jade somehow escapes?

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