Reviewer: Xiao-renzhe Signed [Report This]
Date: August 16 2021 3:43 PM Title: Red Box

Hey! This was pretty good! There's a sore lacking of generally gentle, original, mature content in this community so I really appreciate seeing it when I do! I like worlds in which bigs and smalls just coexist and it's natural. It really helps get past the "oh my god, how'd you get so small" stage. 

Minor syntactical errors here and there and a few cumbersome sentences/paragraphs that I found a tad difficult to follow, but overall this was certainly a fine story. (I do think you wrote "Jerry" instead of "Jeffrey" at one point.)

As far as the "it was all just a dream" thing. Well, they both clearly like each other. So. If you planned to continue this in another story or chapter and we can see them pluck up the courage to approach each other irl, id love to see it! Otherwise, I feel amazingly teased for this having been a perfectly explicit story. Lol.

Please write more! 

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed [Report This]
Date: July 22 2021 5:36 AM Title: Red Box

Haha, I kinda like how comical this whole situation is. Usually these kind of scenes are dramatic, but this is kind of funny. 

I love how Jeffrey introduced himself right there by being all tied up. Hopefully she keeps him tied up. Lol

Ms. Bellum seems like the innocent teacher who was trying to resist all these temptations and now she is finally free. 

Can't wait to see what happens next. I can't wait for the next chapter!