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Reviewer: Gastric Aztec Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: March 23 2022 5:03 AM Title: Going to saitman

I think you have an interesting premise, but the structure of some of the grammar seems like it was written by someone for whom English is a second language. I don’t say this to be mean, but you need to go through this and weed out the mistakes.

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