[Report This]Date: December 20 2024 4:13 AM Title: Girls' Night
Wow, where do I even begin with this? You've done an incredible job bringing together humor, tension, and just the right amount of playful menace. The way you balance Amy’s mischievous teasing with the raw, unpredictable power dynamic between her and John creates this electric energy that I can’t get enough of.
One moment that really hit me was when Amy’s playful threat turns into a small, tender gesture—when she notices John’s distress and switches from her usual carefree teasing to gently picking him up and placing him on her shoulder. It’s that unexpected tenderness amidst all the chaos that really humanizes their relationship. It’s these little details, the moments where we see the softer side of these towering characters, that ground the story emotionally, even in the most absurdly exaggerated situations.
Then, of course, there’s Chloe—what a character! The way you bring her in, shifting from threatening to playful, then back to a bit intimidating, shows just how unpredictable and dangerous this world of giantesses and tinies can be. But you don't just rely on size for the power play; Chloe’s casual dominance, like when she casually sticks John between her breasts, gives her such a fun, almost mischievous energy that works perfectly against the backdrop of John’s anxiety.
You’ve found such a great balance between suspense, humor, and intimacy here. I can’t wait to see where this dynamic between Amy, John, and Chloe leads! Keep it up—this is exactly the kind of story I love to see in this niche.
[Report This]Date: November 29 2023 2:50 PM Title: Girls' Night
Very enjoyable story; one of my favorites. I really like the contrast between Amy’s gentle teasing, and Chloe’s more domineering playfulness. All the interactions and scenarios were enjoyable to read and well written, too. In fact, the scene with John and Amy on the couch inspired me to write a similar scenario in one of my own stories, so thank you for the inspiration.
Date: July 12 2021 12:09 AM Title: Girls' Night
I enjoyed this story a lot. Would like to read more from these characters
Date: July 10 2021 3:52 AM Title: Girls' Night
I love what you've done with this story and I honestly would love to see more of this duo/trio in the future if you ever decide to make more stories based around them. On top of your amazing writing style I think is pairs well with the "cruel"/teasing dynamics between Chloe, Amy and John. Look forward to seeing more content from you.
Author's Response:
Glad you enjoyed it! But these aren't my characters, I'm just borrowing them for a quick one-off. If you want to see more of them, check out the original author's work on here: https://www.patreon.com/squishme
[Report This]Date: June 30 2021 4:56 AM Title: Girls' Night
Wonderfully written, author paints with their words and creates an entertaining dynamic with the attitudes of the characters