[Report This]Date: June 28 2021 3:10 PM Title: Chapter 1
Whilst I like the content of the story itself (it fits really well with commissions seeming to be your stick, which is a nice wink), I would reconsider how the text is formatted. I doubt these immense empty spaces are necessary.
Author's Response:
I'm glad you like it! I'm new to the site and I copy pasted it from a document and you're right, it seems to be quite spaced out! I'll see if I can fix it~ Thank you!
Date: June 28 2021 8:23 AM Title: Chapter 1
Wow, I love this kind of giantess.
Not a huge fan of ass licking and so, but I'm really intrigued by her evil mindset. It gets me willing to know more about her, to read more about her deeds and her sadistic games...
Not sure if you're planning to go on with this, but seriously, congrats. It's very well depicted, the scene, the tiny point of view, her gigantic hands... Love it.
Author's Response:
Thank you for the kind words! I did have a kind of unofficial second chapter, but maybe I'll have to work on it some and add it. <3