Reviewer: 8cm50 Signed [Report This]
Date: December 07 2008 4:01 AM Title: Chapter 1

i'd love to meet this girl... Hope you'll write a lot of sequels to this story. Just allow me to tell you one thing about your writing: may be you'd better pay attention to the breathe of your text.( i'm not english native and it makes it difficult to me to read it!)

Author's Response:

thank you for your words of encouragement i,m not sure what you meant by the text layout i will try in future to simplfy the stories to make it easier for the members who are not english speaking.i am currently writing a story about a lady called Katy the the title will of this is.. THE OFFICE...thank you for reading my story.