Date: October 08 2024 3:56 PM Title: Chapter 12 Motherly love
Like where it's going
[Report This]Date: July 15 2021 11:51 AM Title: Chapter 9 Return to Amanda
cant wait to see the next steps of this and what happens to him
Date: July 04 2021 4:33 PM Title: Chapter 9 Return to Amanda
Loving it so far. Any chance someone who knows him will recognise him in the future?
Date: July 03 2021 6:37 AM Title: Chapter 8 The Star
Loved this chapter!!
Definitely a cool angle bringing in an onlyfans star to have fun with Nick.
And the content was very hot and well written as always.
Date: June 28 2021 12:11 AM Title: Chapter 6 Emily's Treat
Hey there. First off, congrats on your first story. Best part about first stories is that you get to write out your fantasies and what you like. From each chapter, it's like you have a new idea that you wanted to write about. Seeing how the ass chapter was 2 chapters, part of me believes that butt stuff is your favorite giantess content.
Honestly, I'm just curious to see what you are interested in, and would love to see a longer chapter based on your own interest. The vore chapter was good because even though it wasn't your cup of tea, you still managed to write something about it. So now I wonder how much you could write about something you love.
Anyway, the Ms. Lopez chapter was my favorite, mostly because it felt like she did the most stuff with Nick. Also, giantess teachers are one of my kinks and even I did a story based on that. So I'm glad you mentioned that she will return.
I don't mind the smaller chapters, especially since you upload often. So it kinda makes up for it. However, I think a longer chapter here and there would help flesh out what you want to write.
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Thank You very Much for your kind words, i am actually a fan of your story. (Kinda cool how most of my favourite authors have left reviews), i have been doing a bit of practicing in writing a longer type of chapters so hopefully in the future we will get a bigger chapter
[Report This]Date: June 22 2021 4:17 AM Title: Chapter 5 Strapped on
Wow ok this may be my favorite chapter now
I loved the Dom/sub content and Nick being a literal sex toy.
The mouth play and insertion where really well written :) and loved Nick being favorited by this couple.
Hope to see them again :) this chapter was a blast, very sexy
Date: June 21 2021 5:26 PM Title: Chapter 1 Download
Amazing story love it goes a litle fast as people mention but Im still so happy to be reading it love these kinds of stories just a touch more filler and a little more descriptions and you will be on a majour winner
[Report This]Date: June 19 2021 12:23 PM Title: Chapter 1 Download
Love the story so far, initially wasn't a fan of the short chapters but the ass one was lengthy and full of great content. Was kind of hoping that Ms Lopez would figure out his identity but maybe that's still cooking for you. Was curious if you ever planned to do a nose or ear chapter? And of not could youa86;a039;
[Report This]Date: June 19 2021 2:42 AM Title: Chapter 3 Ms Lòpez’s Ass
Great work so far on these chapters, loving the Tiny Tinder aspect borrowed from ThatGirlYouKnow
I hope Ms Lopez adds Nick as a favorite on the app.
(Last chapter's feet content was also very sexy, and you wrote the ass content here very well too)
Date: June 18 2021 7:44 AM Title: Chapter 1 Download
An interesting story, I'm a fan of shrinking out of clothes so I thought I'd like this one a lot and while it has its good points I think you went way too fast. I understand the desire, heck if you read my long ago abandoned story you'll see I too want to rush too often. Still that takes some of the fun out of the story as a huge portion of the fun in a giantess story is imagining the sensations, so just saying "he was nude, she was nude" etc. isn't as fun. Its better to describe how it feels to be getting smaller and to have your clothes balooning around you, how the girl looks nude (or better yet having her strip for him).
You mention in your reviews that your the only one who reads these before posting, may I suggest you find someone on the site (or someone you trust with relveaing this part of your sexuality too) to serve as your beta reader. They go through and point out grammar mistakes as well as make reomcendations on how you can prove before you post. It takes longer to update that way but the updates you do post are so much better then.
Thanks for writing this story and I hope my criticism wasn't too harsh
PYS
Author's Response:
Hi i apriciate your feedback on the story and you bring up some good points, this is my first story so there is a bit of a learning curve and also im just doing this for fun right now but i still wil try to improve on any flaws. i think your point about expanding on how people shirnk is a good idea so i may try to test that out, it may be a little bit until you see these changes in the actual story while i test them out. once again thanks for the feedback
Date: June 17 2021 7:50 PM Title: Chapter 1 Download
Thanks! Matthew's Match was actually my commission lol. Final part is on the way!
Date: June 17 2021 7:01 PM Title: Chapter 2 Becca's Feet
Always good to see someone expanding on Tiny Tinder! Keep up the good work :)
Author's Response:
Thanks for the support im a big fan of your toy for the holidays story, also more people should defintly do tiny tinder or simlar dating apps my favourite story on the site is mathews match witch i think is the best tiny tinder story on here and almost all others are great
Date: June 16 2021 1:41 PM Title: Chapter 1 Download
great start looking forward to seeing more love these style of stories
Date: June 16 2021 11:52 AM Title: Features
Great start. I like how there are different levels to the app of what you can do and chose from. It gives Nick options to chose from. We are only seeing Nick features for the app. The girls could have some different features. They could have a point system that they can spend to change things they want. Like change Nick's size or extend time of date. Those kind of things. I hope you continue to write.
Date: June 16 2021 4:18 AM Title: Chapter 1 Download
i acidentlly removed a review from johnsmith10992 i wanted to apolagize for this i was trying to delete my responce and add an updated version.
johnsmith10992 i apriciate your critism and have already begun to make some changes i have actually read a few of your stories and i wanted to thank you for what you said as this is my first story and im the only one who reads it before hand so its nice to have people willing to give there point of view so that i can improve in the future, a propper chapter 2 will be out soon and again im sorry for removing your comment
[Report This]Date: June 15 2021 2:53 PM Title: Chapter 1 Download
great start! look forward to seeing where you take this
Author's Response:
Thank you so much, Your story is one of the best i have ever read on this site so i Apriciate your suport
Date: June 15 2021 9:51 AM Title: Chapter 1 Download
Good start. Some grammar errors, but perfectly readable. Looking forward to seeing where you take this!
Author's Response:
I'm not the best with grammer but i will always try to fix any problems i see