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Reviewer: vegetaboy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 15 2021 7:19 AM Title: Bus Driver

I love these two starter chapters.

Chapter 1 was great, but chapter 2 blew things away into a whole other level.

Your worldbuilding and description of this bus system and the tiny underground tunnels was great.

And the tunnel and later apartment scenes did a great job at ramping up the tension.

The various characters we got to know, then see die, the corruption/uncaring system that just sweeps things under the rug/pays them to keep quiet.

And the ending with Lisa

All great aspects of this chapter I loved.

Can't wait to read more. 



Author's Response:

I'm glad you loved! I got some stories I'm planning to write, but i think chapter 2 will always be my favorite. 

Thank you vegetaboy for reading and the review! Always makes my day!

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