It's always exciting to see a new author who is writing more developed stories. I really liked this one. Anna's growth felt sort of like a metaphor for honing in one someone, flirting with them, and having them be interested back. Suddenly, this person is a huge portion of your life and interest. Growing is an interesting way to reflect that.

I love stories that develop the romance. It gives more of a sense of the characters and it makes me interested in where they are going. Like what is Arlo going to do now that the woman he was flirting with actually is the most important person in the region? Will he be able to help her? Will Anna stay interested in him? WHat does she do next? I'm wanting more, which is the sign of a good story!