Good that this happened early. If the Enterprice's Head Warrior had been Worf (a man) instead of a woman with Tasha the (Drendrarians? Pelandraians?) probably would've been pissed. I am surprised they are a Warp Civilazation with their Viking Asthetic and archaic rites though.

Not a poor story. I really liked that you gave an explanation to the sudden outbreak of love between Deanna and Tasha, many authors just decide: "That's part of the fanfiction, I won't explain anything." Albeit I am surprised that Q didn't immediately show up to voice his disagreement with the goddess, it would fit his personality.

There is one thing I don't get though. Why didn't anyone (most likely Chief O' Brien) had the idea to beam the way too big growing forms of Troi and Yar onto the planet?/into space? Sure, you don't want to potentially kill two of your officiers, but it's two lives versus the few thousand (!) the Enterprice's crew consists of... For the same reason I don't understand that they don't stay in Orbit for a while for Jordi babbling a bunch of tech words ahem I mean neccessary repairs.

Overall, a little contrived, but enjoyable.