[Report This]Date: November 23 2022 7:26 PM Title: Chapter 1
Very good story and well-written. Enjoyed the back-and-forth approach between Astrid's POV and Filip's. Unaware vore is quite appealing. You know, there could be a continuation of the story with Amanda getting tricked and shrunk down and eaten by Astrid, perhaps after enjoying a bit of foreplay. Maybe a sequel?
Author's Response:
Thanks <3 I thought the POV switches would be a nice way to emphaise the unaware nature of the vore, and the contrasting experiences of Astrid's pleasure with Filip's panic. If you just had Filip's scenes alone then the panic vibe wanes with prolonged exposure, so a switch is a convenient way to reset it.
The commissioner has another entry in my queue coming up in a few months. I believe they wanted a sequel with Astrid, but that may change by the time I start writing. That's a fun idea with Amanda being shrunk down, perhaps if Astrid blames her for Filip "disappearing."
[Report This]Date: April 03 2021 6:27 AM Title: Chapter 1
A++
9 out of 10 Dentists recommend being digested by Astrid. The one who didn't recommend got swallowed.
Author's Response:
Lol, I'm only surprised Astrid didn't swallow the rest too <3
Date: April 02 2021 1:40 AM Title: Chapter 11
Hmm, I can see Penelope being too helpless to leave Filip's cabinet after he disappeared, but Hugo had better survival skills and knew Astrid was still around for two days calling out to Filip and waiting for him to come out on his own. Hugo really should've known it was time to move on, at least hide in his original cubbyhole. I really thought one of them would've been curious to hang outside and witness Filip being snatched by the vacuum. It's frustrating to see Astrid fail to put anything together. Shouldn't his beeper in his pants still have a tracking function in the club if it's still in the "donations" box? There's also the system entry logging when a micro was captured in her vacuum robot or building disposal that she can access as the minister. Astrid seems as confident as she is incompetent at this point.
Author's Response:
Hugo certainly knows better than to stick around, but Penelope does not. He'd need to leave her behind as she waited for Filip, and that wasn't something he was willing to do.
With the beeper, it only sends his coordinates at the time he presses the button. So she'll have gotten a notification when he pressed it within the vacuum, but nothing after that.
As for the system logging of the building disposal and micro capture, Astrid could check it if she knew it existed, but she doesn't, at least not at this point. She's likely to continue searching for Filip and perhaps in time she might piece things together, but that's beyond the scope of this story.
Date: March 31 2021 2:12 PM Title: Chapter 8
I think Filip would've normally came out of his hidden compartment on his own all the time to be with Astrid, so I wonder what danger Penelope and Hugo are in since the compartment is the first place Astrid will look when Filip doesn't come out to greet her. Maybe one of them will admit seeing Filip get sucked up by the vaccum cleaner and this will set off the chain reaction of memories especially if she checks her phone app linked to Filip's beeper and sees it's at the club. We'll have to see if Astrid has a change of heart, sparing and caring for them out of guilt for killing her lover and bestfriend; or if she just says screw it and helps herself to a small breakfast.
Author's Response:
Yep, Penelope and Hugo are in huuuuuuuuge danger right now. It all comes down to whether Astrid believes them when she finds them...
Date: March 30 2021 9:09 PM Title: Chapter 7
Huh, Filip's line about having a beeper leads me to believe that Astrid will learn he's was at Forbidden Desires that night. If she puts two and two together; 1. Filip was there that night, 2. Amanda may reveal that they got the last, freshly caught micro, 3. maybe his name was Filip not Phil, 4. Finally he knew her by name, then she'll realize his fate, that she ate her boyfriend afterall. Curious to see how learning what she did to her lover does to her (assuming she doesn't throw him up in the next hour and save him). As much as I'd like to believe she will be shaken to her core and turn over a new leaf by actually using her position to bring micros to communities instead of feeding grounds, I don't think that'l happen. She's already shown a predatory nature with Filip, as if she enjoys stringing him along until he discovers who she really is. I think she may feel somewhat guilty, but more strongly be disappointed she didn't get to play with him longer, revel in her taboo finally being revealed to her tiny and vulnerable boyfriend
Author's Response:
It's lovely hearing your speculation. And yeah, the hints are certainly there for Astrid to put together... if she isn't too drunk <3