Date: June 15 2021 10:40 AM Title: Chapter 1
You got me as soon as Ben's mother swaddled him up in her scarf and Emily started throwing him up into the air. Good balance of playful and loving. Your writing style is straightforward and easily readable, and I appreciate your insistence on keeping the characters gentle.
Date: May 05 2021 10:07 PM Title: Chapter 12
I know you said to mot expect much sexy stuff because it was a gentle giantess story, but I think adding a bit more erotic stuff with maybe the girlfriend or his mom's friends would be awesome. I think gentle giantess are at their best when their is a nice balance between erotic stiff and wholesome stuff, but that's just my opinion.
Author's Response:
There'll be some sexy stuff with Kara coming up, but this is mostly a PG story, so it won't be a major part of the story. I am writing another story that's more into that sort of thing, but it'll be some time before it's finished, I'm afraid.
Date: May 05 2021 4:36 PM Title: Chapter 15
Can't wait for more of the story. Keep up the great work! Is he goi to become smaller too in the future?
Author's Response:
Yes, there'll be one more miniaturization coming up. Thanks for the kind review!
Date: March 15 2021 5:18 PM Title: Chapter 1
I wish in future chapter when Ben shrinking more that mother hide Ben in her purse, and in her panties. Or maybe that hide Ben in her Panties is Kara.
[Report This]Date: March 10 2021 7:50 PM Title: Chapter 1
Very cool! Will this have some feet or size comparisons or something like that? But in any case, loved the way you write. Very gentle, fun and lighhearted. Already a fan : )
Author's Response:
Thank you, I appreciate it! I'm not sure what you mean by size comparison, since I'd imagine that's what the story is all about in any case. I'm not a fan of foot stuff, sorry, but there will be a short scene like that later.
[Report This]Date: March 08 2021 2:48 AM Title: Chapter 1
Awesome start, hope to see more :) this one is sounding rlly good.
Author's Response:
Thanks, I hope you'll like it!
[Report This]Date: March 07 2021 11:28 PM Title: Chapter 1
Hey its a great start, it sounds really promising and light hearted.
Author's Response:
I hope you'll enjoy it! It will be a very light-hearted and carefree story, about the kind of experience I'd like to have if I were shrunk.
[Report This]Date: March 07 2021 7:33 PM Title: Chapter 1
I just read through this whole story on your DA, and I enjoyed it a lot! I'm looking forward to seeing how you revise and expand it here. Have a good one!
-Pluto
Author's Response:
Thanks, happy you liked! There won't be entire new chapters here, just some small alterations and maybe a few new paragraphs and scenes.
[Report This]Date: March 07 2021 6:35 PM Title: Chapter 1
Can we get a link to your Deviant art page?
It's nice to have you back writing another gentle story. One of my long time favorite gentle writers. Excited to experience a new family dynamic.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review! I hope you'll like the story. There's a link to my DA page in my author page here.
Date: March 07 2021 3:13 PM Title: Chapter 1
Sounds great ! U have drawing to go with it ?
Author's Response:
Sorry, I'm not any good at drawing!