[Report This]Date: July 26 2022 2:12 PM Title: Throat Jumpers
I can tell you had a lot of fun writing this chapter, and it shows.
Gillian, oh you poor poor dunce XD Jocelyn really is sinking her claws in deep here.
Love the concept of thrill seeking "Throat Jumpers" yet another great idea you've incorporated into this verse. And of course, Jocelyn planned to cut the lines XD
You did a great job on this chapter as always, I loved it, and you're continuing to tell these stories well and just have me hooked on every chapter.
Patiently waiting till next time, and enjoying the re-reads while I do :D
[Report This]Date: November 29 2021 11:20 PM Title: Kali's Revenge
All hail the red shoes
Author's Response: Her red shoes will consume all :)
[Report This]Date: August 25 2021 4:28 AM Title: Gym Partners
I think I just found my all time favorite story on this site! Incredible, man... just mind blowing stuff. I love the cruelty and the gore, absolutely love it! It is crazy because when I'm not in a GTS mood, and I think about the stuff in this story, it's shockingly repulsive. My face grimmaces and I shudder at the memories of what I've read. But then, when I'm ready to read GTS stories... this one has been a guilty pleasure. I loved the Mommy Dearest chapter, I've read that one about 4 times now. Keep up the good work! Can't wait to read more.
Author's Response: I'm so glad you're enjoying it so much! That means so much coming from someone like you. As for the mother making a return, maybe. In her own solo chapter without her daughters. I do have some other ideas that will be just as exciting so be on the lookout for them in the future!
Author's Response: I'm so glad you're enjoying it so much! That means so much coming from someone like you. As for the mother making a return, maybe. In her own solo chapter without her daughters. I do have some other ideas that will be just as exciting so be on the lookout for them in the future!
Date: August 08 2021 8:36 AM Title: Gym Partners
You know, I really didn't vibe all that much with the last chapter and it's more extreme levels of violence and gore, although of course not without its high points still, like the shoes in the aftermath of Candis' day and such, but more broadly it just wasn't really my thing (not a critique at all, just explaining my own perspective).
However, what a fantastic chapter to follow up with. Candis and Jocelyn putting much of their sadistic ways to good use, whilst also roping a fellow giantess into their games, unbeknownst to her.
Absolutely love the broad focus on feet and in-shoe, especially with the setting which pretty much guarantees plenty of sweat/smell orientated torments for the tinies involved, as well as even for the other giantesses exposed to it. Also, it's really impressive how you manage to ride the line when it comes to comparable levels of smell between different characters, which is a hurdle I think a lot of people struggle with. By which I mean, having someone like Candis, whose feet and shoes are notoriously and incomprehensibly ghastly in regards to their stink, and yet still making the comparatively less terrible odours of Jocelyn and Gillian still powerful and something to be feared. Absolutely brilliant stuff!
Plus, it's always nice to see Candis diversify her arsenal with another pair of horrifyingly pungent shoes for her tinies to dread.
Author's Response:
The last chapter was a bit too gorey, I agree and it did make me rework some of the ideas I have right now as to what to do with the mother of the two sisters. Unless people want her back, she won't be in the series for a full blown role, for sure not as a giantess.
That being said, I am super glad you enjoyed the gym chapter! This was an idea I had since I started chapter 4 and I knew I wanted to have an unaware aspect to it in some way. It's asking for scenerios like this. As for more of Candis' shoes, she has plenty of shoes that her micros fear. Her work shoes are the number one deadly shoes and then there's her workout sneakers. With still more to visit. Again, I'm glad you enjoyed the new chapter, I hope to see you around next time!
[Report This]Date: July 01 2021 5:23 AM Title: Mommy Dearest
Incredible
Author's Response:
Hey thanks!
Date: June 06 2021 8:44 PM Title: Jason's New Life
Another superb chapter!
Still loving where this is going, and can't wait to see where things progress from here, both with Jocelyn and Candis. Feel free to discard if you already have plenty of plans, but maybe Candis could rope Jocelyn into helping her punish a few micros beneath both of their terrible feet, or even micros having to compare and judge the stench of the sisters' feet and shoes? Just some thoughts anyway.
Also, still absolutely enamoured by your sly inclusion of Candis' work shoes here and there, just to really build them up as the truly infamous threat they seem to be. Especially having her walk past Jason whilst wearing them, only for him to hear the cries of the poor micros trapped and suffering within. Really genius stuff!
Author's Response:
Thank you again! I do like that idea a little bit, not gonna lie. I do have a few plans for the future of the story and that one can be included. Having the two sisters interact and punish some unlucky micros with them forcibly smelling their feet. I can work it in to an already planned chapter so no need to go discarding it just yet.
Candis' red work shoes, they will make another come back in the next chapter. Can't promise the shoes will be ever present but those shoes have not been retired in the sense of Candis using them to end micros. No, the Red Shoes of Death have not crushed their last micro victims.
[Report This]Date: June 06 2021 6:16 AM Title: Jason's New Life
Quite the cliffhanger
Author's Response:
It leads a little bit into the next chapter, cliffhanger will hopefully be resolved shortly
Date: June 05 2021 7:22 PM Title: Jason's New Life
I love this so freaking much!! I dunno how I missed it when the first chapters were posted! Glad it's continuing! Candis is honestly one of my fave cruel giantesses now. and shrunken women is my favorite category of these stories so I'm glad to see a lot of action in that department lol. Can't wait to read more!!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! I do plan on continuing this story and I do have some really fun ideas that I think everyone will enjoy. For Candis, she's a really fun character to write and we haven't seen the last of her or her sister with them torturing the micros they "own". I hope to see you soon as the story continues!
Date: May 10 2021 3:35 PM Title: Work Ethic
This is absolutely fantastic work!
Really impressed with both the creative flair on display, as well as the willingness to allow suspense to build and payoff for certain events, such as with the vileness of Candis' red sneakers. Also, with just how readble and well-characterised the whole story is.
Just out of interest, do we have any idea how tall either of the sisters are, or possibly either of their shoe sizes? No worries if not, but I just thought it worth asking as I know that sort of information can add a little something extra for some people (like me).
Can't wait to see where things go from here, and all the best until then, man!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for the kind words! I tried to make almost every character, both micro and human have at least some sort of background, even if they're only in the story for a short bit.
As for their heights, fortunate for you I based the sister off of some irl friends and for the most part, I know how tall they are and their shoe size. Candis is about 5'3 with size 7 and Jocelyn is about 4'11ish with her wearing a size 4. I hope that adds to the immersion of the story for you and I hope to see you in the future!
Date: May 10 2021 3:44 AM Title: Work Ethic
A very fun story. My kind of stuff. Keep up the good work
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! I'm glad you're enjoying the story so far and I hope to see you in the future as the story continues :)
[Report This]Date: May 10 2021 3:42 AM Title: Work Ethic
O_O Kali is here......from "Taking the Bus"
Ok I was not expecting this.
Her appearance will make things interesting.
Tons of great content in this chapter, and this story as a whole and I am very interested in seeing where it goes.
This deserves more feedback and reviews (sorry for not reviewing sooner, haven't been too active her recently)
Keep up the great work!
Author's Response:
Adding Kali from TTB was an intresting choice for a number of reasons, some for the future of this story as well as some hints to possible future stories but for now, my lips are shut about her future in this story. For now, she's there to show a proper connect between TTB and it's Microverse counterparts and that it takes place around the time of TTB. Hope to see you around for the next few chapters!
[Report This]Date: March 25 2021 11:57 AM Title: Micro Streaming
Great story! Only thing I would have liked to see was more variety in punishments. Having some get sat on or something.
I thought tying him to her crocs was very clever though.
Author's Response:
Thank you, I wanted to do more punishments (butt crush, inshoe and if the micros were smaller, a bit of nose) but I saw the chapter only getting longer the more I wrote. As it stands right now, this story is concluded but we could go back to the sisters and their tiny pet in the future if people want more of them.
The crocs idea was actually based on Jocelyn's real life inspriation , she always wears crocs!
Date: March 03 2021 6:16 PM Title: Abduction!
Excellent story so far! I really like the character dynamics in this one. Looking forward to chair 2
Author's Response:
Thank you! This one was a real fun one to make! I hope to have the next chapter out in the coming weeks so not too much longer of a wait:)