[Report This]Date: February 25 2021 4:13 AM Title: Welcome to Yvonna's town.
This is pretty good for a first story. What i will say is I didn't really like the toejam part but then again i dont like toejam in gts stuff in general so that more of a personal thing. Another thing i will say is try not to spend too much time on one thing and show some good gts scenarios. Spending too much time on one thing will sort of make your story seem more stretched out that it needs to be. As for the scenarios you did a very good job on those, but like i said i didn't like the toejam part but thats just a personal thing. Cant wait to see more from you in the future bro and cant wait to see who the second giantess will be. Not gonna lie humans being transported to a pokemon world is an interesting concept.
Author's Response:
Thanks! And that's understandable, not everyone likes the same stuff in this fetish. I don't like gore but some people love it, so don't expect that in my stories.
As for scenarios. I think that's gonna be a big issue. When I start writing a scene out I like to have details to help visualize what's on but don't know when to stop. Primarily I like being in the role of the shrunken person but I'm going to try in the third chapter to show more from a giantess PoV.
As for the second giantess, I'm torn on using two. I'm going to leave a link to their pictures with a small bio in the note of the next chapter since I want to use them for the third.
I'm hoping to use characters that we don't see often in size content, such as Yvonna the Worker Trainer from S&S. Seriously, such an great design and I've only seen two gts related pics featuring her.
There is a few interactive stories at writing.com which I was inspired by that are like that. Shrunk by Pokemon Trainers by Ponymon and Shrunk near you Favorite girl by Lover of all Giantesses are the most popular. The later focusing on all media.
Once again, thanks for the tips! They're much appreciated!