[Report This]Date: February 20 2021 9:29 AM Title: Chapter 1: Wake up
Wow! This was an absolutely great read, I figured I'd read a chapter or two and here I am 15 chapters later at 3 am. I like how you use the different magical races as a way to adjust the overall scale of the interaction - the elves were already diminutive to her, but the sprites were practically dust - its a very neat way of upping the already catastrophic impact of Bula's most mundane actions. I was almost hoping for Bula to have some sort of sympathy for a captive of hers at one point or another, but given her almost nonchalant attitude of the weak being little more than pests to the strong, I guess it wouldn't be very in character.
Not a ton of stories at this scale out there overall, either - I like one-on-one stories with smaller giantesses and tera-sized continent stomping alike, but something about being large enough to wreak mass havoc while still being able to have individual interaction every now and then just feels like the perfect scale to me.
Author's Response:
Thank you for the kind words! I feel a tad conflicted to read when people binge a story. On the one hand, I don't want people to ruin their sleep routines. On the other hand, it is flattering in a sense haha.
I'm glad you liked the mixed-size aspects. As a fun fact, originally this story just had Bula dealing with the elf settlement, but I figured fae could be involved in hiding it, and then thought "hmm what about a fae city..."
I did briefly debate Bula taking Helemys with her back towards the lair as well. I decided against it because I wasn't sure if Helemys's pride would clash well with Bula's character
Mixed-size stories definitely have advantages with balancing scales of interaction, and they are one of my favorite types of size stories.
Anyways, thanks again for sharing your thoughts!
[Report This]Date: February 19 2021 8:14 AM Title: Chapter 1: Wake up
Wow this story was insane. I had to keep reading and reading till I finished it.
Very very few stories I"ve read pull off an immersive character based read with a giantess as Big as Bula. This was an interesting adventure to follow where she might go next or what horrible end would befal her next victim or settlement!
The way you switched persepectives was done effectivly and especially with the snot scene really highlighted how a small act for Bula could result in a horrific end for small people.
I think one of the largest strengths is how in the middle of a huge rampage Bula would slow down to excintuate the moment like with the heel to toe foot crush or with the burp. There would be no reason for a 500ft giantess to rush so she may as well take her time enjoying it once she has them cornered.
Not sure if this is done but I will be gladly awaiting more if its coming.
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Not sure if you are a fan or not of post vore content, but I for one would like to see what happens to Bula's huge meals after she's done digesting. Perhaps the next village could get some hot winds or a brown avalanche.
The way you write I think you could realy nail that sort of scene if you wanted to.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the comment!
I'm pleased you liked the perspective switching. I was worried it'd be too redundant at times, but I thought it could be interesting to show a contrast of thoughts and experiences between Bula and the smaller beings at her mercy.
As to your first question, this story is currently complete.
To the other questions, I'm actually not a big fan of "post-vore" content. Although I enjoy burps at times, the 'other-end' so-to-speak doesn't interest me that much. So, anything along those lines is not going to happen most likely.
In any case though, thank you so much for sharing your thoughts. I'm happy you liked the story!