After reading through this story I have wondered how there will be any reconciliation with the overwhelming sorrow John must be going through. Any human would not want to go on living after everything Lily has put him through. There is a lot of hints as to him not enjoying being used in this manner by his sister. I think it would be interesting to flesh out a scenario where Lily has to overcome his complete broken will to live after this day of torture if this is what he  has to look forward to as she made clear will be for the rest of his life. I feel there should have been more introspection on his part with his mental health after her spending over $1,700 on all those toys as well as the torture of being branded in such a painful way, the overwhelming torture he went through in being subjected to staying in Lily's mouth during her eating and drinking, after his only recourse is to lash out she subjects him to hours of being under her sandal as she walks through town.  and then the unrelenting torcher of being used as a living dildo being completely engulfed in her vagina and anus. This would break any human to the point of not wanting to live any longer. After she made him give her ideas with the promise of being able to rest and him giving into her without her holding up to her promise but rather placing him in her panties and then farting on him. The dehumanizing effect it would have on a person would create more of a devastating break from reality. I would think he would just mindlessly start to beg for her to end him. This would make her need to take stock in what she is doing and how she wants to move forward with him in a manner that would ease him into submission rather that this abrupt method. This is a very engaging story and has my interest peaked to say the least and am looking forward to reading more when you post. I truly hope you take my opinion for what it is "My opinion" 

This is a very good series and i love the detail you put into it. Very descriptive of the presy experiences. The main thing im wondering is when you also plan to add the vore. The mouthplay is there, but no actual vore yet. Im really excited to see when you do and how you do it. :)

Happy to see this story continuing! Would have loved to see more time and different types of punishment with John stuck in the back of her thong though.

More more more please!  Lol

This story just keeps getting better. Might be the best one out there. Any idea when we get to see the next chapter?

Absolutely loving this story and can't wait for more. 

Loved the new chapter! Really looking forward to the butt stuff and I loved how Hazel doesn't love John and just needs someone to satisfy her kink. Would love to see more of John crushing on Hazel and being disappointed by her. 

Loving the series so far. Currently half way through chapter 4 and have read chapter 8. Looking forward to the reunion of Hazel and what is to come especially Margot and how she is willing to sell lily sadist equipment. 

Man, it must be heart-aching for the poor little fella, to be seen by Hazel in his current status!

amazing story!please add more ass